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Old 01-30-04, 08:48 PM   #1
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. . . Can You Feel Me ?. . .

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Seeing Is Believing. . But Through Words You Must Treat These Rhymes Like Brail. . For You Cannot See But You Can Visualize. . You Can Hear. . The Message. . The Most Profound Of It's Time. .

Revolutionary Wordsmith, Words Gift To The Preliminary
Now I Stand Atop Hip Hop As A Visionary. . .
. . . . With No Blurred Rifts From The Sounds Carried {It's Now Scary}
My Speech Is Vivid. . Mosts Reach Is Timid
Grab The Mic. . Rip It. . Respect. . Give It
I've Obtained A Tongue Is Similar To Picasso. . . .
. . . Open Mouth Paintings Of Mona Lisas With My Lyrical Bravado. .
I Try To Make Shit As Clear As Possible With No Photography
Blink Twice And Ya Eyes Just Might Not Be Able To Adjust N See
What I Have Created, You Can Debate It, But That's Expected
I Treated The Rap Game Like Car Collisions N Fucking Wrecked It
Bar Incisions Tear Skin N Bones From Ligaments
You're In A Predicament Where You're Forced To Submit Ya Pen
See, You're Wack, Fact Is, I'm All The Positive Adjectives
I'll Take Ya Words, Play Um, N Throw Um Back With No Spin
DJ, Feel Me ?. . . . Turn My Shit Up Loud And Let It Bump
My Sound Is Now. . . . While Most Junk Is Foul N Fucked
Follow The Flow, Down The River N Quiver From Instrumentals
That I've Laced. . . With My Superior Mental. . .
You Try To Repeat N I'll Fuck Ya Dental -
N Let The Lyrics Smash Ya Fuckin' Temple *It's Real*

[Chorus]
So Please. . If You Feelin' This Sound Bombing Through. .
Ya Speakers Then Lemme Know So I'll Continue To Bless You. .
Shouts To The Supporters, One Finger To The Haters Kid. .
If You Feel Me. . Can You Feel Me. . Turn Up This Shit. .

It Was Awhile Ago, I'd Style N Pose, Now Just My Prose
Is Proposed As The Sickest Flow, I'm Dope Now I'm Suppose
Spittin' Lyrics Immuned To Mimics, Retuned My Spirit
Now I'm Nearin Clearance To #1 N Kids Don't Wanna Hear It
I'm Sorry For Being Sick With Pens, I'll Stick With Friends
I Don't Wanna Put Up With This Shit Again, Here's My Ends
Fuck That, You Mother Fuckers, I'll Spit Lines Like Knives
N Slice Ya Lives In Half, Expectancy Set To Four Days Past -
Today, N The Day Is Four Days To What I Told You Last
So Hurry Fast N Kiss Your Family Cause They'll Miss Ya Ass
That's Not Even At The Height Of My Capabilities, Not Feelin' Me ?
Fucka Ginsu After What I Been Through, I Wanna Kill An MC
I'll Shatter All Patterns Of Attackin', This Is Iraq Again. . .
You Came For My Weapons Of MC Destruction . .
Left Empty Handed With Ya Pride Stripped N Mind Concussin'
I'm The Next Great Lyricist With Piercin Hits, The Eardrums Bleed
Notice My Significance N Take A Glimpse Cause After Fear Comes Me
Nuclear Warhead Sited, After One Track I Was Sworn Dead
Is It My Fault I Was Born Ahead ?. . . Advanced Intelligence. . .
Enhanced Developments, Formula's To. . . .
. . . Through Words, Take You Around My Mind With A Magellan-Sense. . .
I'm Hip Hop's Essence *It's Real!*

[Chorus]

It's A New Day. . Writtens Scripted On Looseleaf. . Make Ya Favorite MC's Lose Sleep. . You Know I Aim To Bruise Deep. . N If You Don't Feel Me. . Fuck You. . Ain't Like I Was Askin For Ya Support Anyway. .
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Old 01-31-04, 01:41 AM   #2
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Drugs Are Bad Mmkay.
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Old 01-31-04, 12:10 PM   #3
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Seems like i'm not gettin' any feedback in return. .
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Old 01-31-04, 03:05 PM   #4
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goo dshit..I can see that you are improving(you already nice)..this had some sick flows..good scheme..I don't know why this is getting slept on...
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Old 01-31-04, 03:50 PM   #5
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(you already nice)..

. . Dope. . Iunno Why It's Gettin slept On Either. . I've Checked Numerous Pieces. . Oh well.
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Old 01-31-04, 10:56 PM   #6
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One last time. . people who's pieces i've checked, return the favor.
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Old 02-01-04, 12:22 AM   #7
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Good peice...Good flow, wordplay etc...
why is this being slept on?

favorite lines...

"I've Obtained A Tongue Is Similar To Picasso. . . .
. . . Open Mouth Paintings Of Mona Lisas With My Lyrical Bravado. ."

Dope As Fuck...

Keep Spittin...
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Old 02-01-04, 01:16 AM   #8
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I'm feeling the flow, I love this piece dawg, shits how, I like how it sounds out-loud.. It has a nice flow to it. Good text cuz..
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Old 02-01-04, 06:52 AM   #9
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i feel u on this dawg, sum real nice stuff here, keep spittin
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