8 bars max
20 mins max
u spit first dawg
checkin n

ey yo dis cats scared to spit first so ima bring it to the table
we got a young amateur on our hands 14 right out the APOLLO stable
its cool tho to see a young gunna tryna get at dis thang
but once im done with ya boy that catll never be the same
yo dawg you play football? well maybe you can understand
but don't me mad dat im da playa n you a bitch in the stands
u don't like me in this game cuz i play too rough?
ima make ya ass scream uncle n tell me dis is enough!
how u gon compare us two? when he ain't even like me?
cuz dis kid is strate gator n yte grl is just nike
what the fuck is yte grl? sounds like a gay crew name to me
u prolly aint even gangsta, u just a fuckin wannabe
come up talkin shit to dis kid n da MC
we got techs we got 9's thatll leave u sprawled out on the street
face down in the gutta, bullet whole in ya neck
n if u ain't sho what crew u fuckin wit! next time u betta check

half of his shit didnt hit cause ima chick/
im on the field ur a chessplayer tryin 2 get a chick/
ur the 1 in the stand screamin my name/
sayin i wish i could b that girl i wish i had game/
ur lame u dont belong in the game u cant rhyme/
im not scared 2 go first it was ur callout not mine/
yeah hes wearin gator air force 1 but they fake/
im wearin real gucci his gator aint real its paint/
y r u allways sayin young gunnerz r they ur idols/
hes a bitch he cant take the pain he needs midol/
kid im the nose guard ur the equipment manager/
while im gettin the applause ur gettin laughter/
now ur reputation is shattered its broke/
against this white girl ur bound to choke/
face it u cant rap u dont belong in the game/
r u really hotbarz did y change ur name?/

vote and drop a link i will return the favor

uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
ill return the favor!!!!!!!!!

Honestly...
This was a weak battle
Flow was newbie'sh
Vocab was unheard of
Wordplay was weak but i guess there
Multies, Un heard of also
Structure was weak from both..

I'm not even gonna vote,
Just givin ya advice on what you need

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man fuck...iono who to vote for..both were pretty weak...the openers on both were horrible..Yte Girl's first 2 lines didn't evne rhyme cuz they was the same word...flow on both was pretty bad...no good punchlines...shit...no multis either...basic rhymes....I'ma give this to Yte Girl...even tho both were pretty bad, she had a better structure I guess...

vote-yte girl

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...442#post1148442

^ needs votes

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uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnn
ill return the favor
drop a link

uppinnnnnnnn #4
like i said drop a link and ill return the favor

ey yo dis cats scared to spit first so ima bring it to the table
we got a young amateur on our hands 14 right out the APOLLO stable
pretty weak
its cool tho to see a young gunna tryna get at dis thang
but once im done with ya boy that catll never be the same
ya battlin a girl
yo dawg you play football? well maybe you can understand
but don't me mad dat im da playa n you a bitch in the stands
once again, ^ sounds pre-written to me. Look at the name. None of these punches are effective dawg
u don't like me in this game cuz i play too rough?
ima make ya ass scream uncle n tell me dis is enough!
whack
how u gon compare us two? when he ain't even like me?
cuz dis kid is strate gator n yte grl is just nike
yte GIRL
what the fuck is yte grl? sounds like a gay crew name to me
u prolly aint even gangsta, u just a fuckin wannabe
come up talkin shit to dis kid n da MC
we got techs we got 9's thatll leave u sprawled out on the street
face down in the gutta, bullet whole in ya neck
n if u ain't sho what crew u fuckin wit! next time u betta check
Aight this was weak, no punches or personals landed cause you pre wrote this shit to battle a guy and didn't change it when it was a girl. Herb


half of his shit didnt hit cause ima chick/
im on the field ur a chessplayer tryin 2 get a chick/
yo get rid of the / after ya lines. Unnecessary. ok punch, but weak 2nd line
ur the 1 in the stand screamin my name/
sayin i wish i could b that girl i wish i had game/
ok, dun feed off his verse tho
ur lame u dont belong in the game u cant rhyme/
im not scared 2 go first it was ur callout not mine/
ok personal
yeah hes wearin gator air force 1 but they fake/
im wearin real gucci his gator aint real its paint/
played and weak
y r u allways sayin young gunnerz r they ur idols/
hes a bitch he cant take the pain he needs midol/
played
kid im the nose guard ur the equipment manager/
while im gettin the applause ur gettin laughter/
played...be creative
now ur reputation is shattered its broke/
against this white girl ur bound to choke/
ok...jus ok
face it u cant rap u dont belong in the game/
r u really hotbarz did y change ur name?/
weak


Yte Grl takes this. She had punches and personals that actually hit, mC couldn't grasp the concept that he was battlin a girl. Vote=yte grl

Please drop an honest vote here guys. Remember to poll. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110540

uppin 4 the last time drop a link and ill vote......

vote one these
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111488

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111118

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111132
vote on those

like every1 said....both verses seemed n00bish.........disses were weak, wordplay was fucked n all dat.....but i think Yte girl takes it based on a better structured verse....i mean...both cats didnt score points in other category...both need 2 elevated on yur wordplay n disses.....1


vote = yte girl

hit this battle up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110017

okay if you fucks even knew what apollo was you would understand the lines you dumbasses
but you all are a bunch of white kids who can't rhyme