Lets set it up nicely, bee

-In-

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set it up nicely this time jack.
10 lines MAXIMUM this time (my bad!)
u spit when ur ready homez

10 lines! deal .. u spit aswell when u ready man ...i drop soon.......
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Like cure-in cancer sientists i will leave u wit nuttin less than a hunch
Mutilate fake-herbs like u fresh-meat get you dusty when i spike u'r punch
Fuck this its over u cant win, face fact they allready faced you!
Your wack useless and a fag tell me what you now gonna do?
Haha shits funny second time you get murked & we just met..
Like a new born baby u the one shittin your fukkin diaper wet..
Cuz u like pringles i abuse u, once i pop u better know it , i cant stop
Mutalate u like a minority report b4 u'r fake-ass even made-a-drop
Shit i say your wack & everyone knows its true..
Now u got sonned again, damn i feel for you ..


This faggot wanted a rematch, nigga face it u look wacker than tha! brady bunch!!!! Spit!!

check in....

I understand my first line pulled the wrong trigger/
but its 'flat-line' time now, and i aint talkin bout ur mom's figure/
Cos my aim's to leave u PHYSICALLY torn/
I'mma stretch this pussy out, like Voletta, when Biggie was born/
your lyrics are worn out, like timbs in the ghetto/
and ur startin to drag on ru paul in stilletos/
while my shit connects like lego/
your still tryin 2 get a solid reputation while ur soft like jello/
so the moral of the story is clear/
if u was really "all that" then you wuldnt be here

GRAVY!!!!!! that shit was nice brozz!! c how it went down this time

Ok..Well that was enjoyable.
First of Jea, dont put ur text in size 1 just to make it seem like ur shit aint stretched. slut.
But as far as the content goes.. nice.
Good use of words.
Some ok & good punches, nothing really oustanding but, Ok.

No real punches..
Some slightly funny lines, like the biggie line.
But apart from that.. just elevate.
Concentrate, focus on ur opponent more ..
& work on ur creativity.

vote M-Jae for better punches & a overall better verse, basically

Do I need to give any reply... Yes the rules says so lol

Anywayz.. I think M-Jae tryed really hard on this one, that dyper line seeemed to have soo much effort, and O_o he just killed this kid, ah well that last part wasn't sarcasm, anyway his flow, punches was above M Sixteens so i'ma give him the vote..

V/M-Jae

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M-Jae
Verse was aight..........sum lines weren't hard hittin but flow and style was nice....most punches hit and finisher was cool......nice verse

M-Sixteen
punches were aight but not as hard hittin...........flow was off...........structure was off..................elevate................stay up

v/ M-Jae

peace

thought this was pretty one sided, M-jai, ive seen better from you, but this was easily good enough to take it.... J, ya had some nice wordplay, and a good scheme to ya verse, although some lines were stretched... ya punches hit decent and were quite consistant... could have come harder tho in places... M sixteen... your punches need work, didnt really connect hard enough, and the scheme didnt really set them up well... work on them... and be more consistant, with ya bar length too.....
....vote=M-jae.... an all round better verse......

Vote: M-Jae

He had the more creative verse. He attempted more wordplay, and conected with more punches. Jae had a few lines i thought were cool, but Sixteen only had the cool opener, so M-Jae gets my vote for consistantsy, punches and creativity.

-W1

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