10-15lines
you spit first
no bullshit
no hate/dr/crew votes

spit 20mins afta you checkin...... an yeah since you already got your shit written then it wont be a problem for yah

no feedin, right??

this is my checkinnnnnnnnnnn

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Till Eye Die vs CAMROK ~ Vote this!!!

yeah sure no feedin...whateva the fuck that is

oh yeah dun worry i aint gonna feed off your lines man...i got my own shit...dont gotta use your shit against you

Gonna make 'flash', crash like he's in the middle of World War II
'Khmerboiz' what the fuck kinda name is that for a crew
Produce rhymes so sick, like bird droppings on ur head passin
The shit slides down ur face, flash.. are you Micheal Jackson?
Your little brother doesn't know if ur 'black or white'
I guess that doesn't change the fact u like it small and tight
Man, that shits not right, ur brother, are you retarded?
Ur probably the culprit, then looks around the room and asks who farted
U started this shit, and now your getting discarded
Put down the pen & paper, from this u can't be guarded
It's like a lightning strike, except you see no 'flashes'
wake up next morning, with CAMROK spelled on you in gashes
your done, just took this battle and placed it in the ashes

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"Just let our spirits live on, through the lyrics that you hear in our songs"

-E.m.I.n.E.M-

Till Eye Die vs CAMROK ~ Vote this!!!

I'm 'diss-interested' in 'dissin' this kid, dismissin his shit
disinterested in lettin him live...
livin for killin these kids, these scripts be written in sigs....
only 'flow' that you know is the 'spit'-in ya bib
the only 'hard'ness within, is the 'dick' in your ribs
Now I see how you 'rip shit'....I'll rip ya lips from ya chin
distilled my spit, and yet im sick of dis still
sick cuz i'm ill, I've been inflicted wit skill
he tasted 'hate' for a minute as i 'pissed' in his grill
picture per-fect when I have this bitch cuffed to the back of a movin hearse-its
murder in the first
hit high speed, as I watched his eyes bleed, crazed to see his spleen burst
dragged this fag over broken glass till the blood from his inside started to drip from his ass
Stepped out for a second, to teach him lesson, heel to his 'nuts'...now whos 'cummin' in last?

yeah an jus tah let you know...khmerboiz that is the name of mi underground group....if you got aol ill send you the song...

uppin for votes.....

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both flows were aight, flash u'r structure is alil messed up, but not that bad that it can't be fixed. work on that, and the punches, seemed like u was just dissin him with hate disses, no good punches or personals. cam u'r flow was pretty good, and u had more personals that hit, just try to be more creative. vote-cam

fav lines cam- uhh ok flow, and wordplay, good imagery i guess, punch was weak

flash- good flow, nice wrdplay, ok punch.

flash try to keep ya couplets seperated, also use less vocab and more punches. verse was coo, just didn't have the personals.

peep my battle with ghost
and vote

peace

uppin 2

flash wrecked this. he was just too much. complex rhyme scheme. i write poetry so i appreciate that. its hard to do with no beat. but good job. punches were there vocab and all was tight.
camrok used a lot of gay and mj meta's so it took away. cam look around rb and most rappers who lose use on ro two of those things. bad idea. been tried like too much.
vote=flash

vote on these
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111132
me versus physik
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111138

yo cutastraphe when you wanna battle me lets do it...you voted on my battles and shit...we battle but i wanna make it a 2 style battle so we switch the shit up

haha.. michealcor gotta be kidding me.. look on rb??? i've been here longer then you. Calling them gay.. pretty sad.. u know called a sense of humor..... maybe? I loosen shit up a little bit. and I have never seen a mj line on this site. but of course u have. u post 36 times a day for 3 days.

uppin (1).. i respect opinions.. but don't be a dipshit, that vote wasn't even done right

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Till Eye Die vs CAMROK ~ Vote this!!!

boy niggas hate when they dont get the vote. mike j lines played like gay jokes. for real. 36 posts a day. i do more here than just battle niggas. cypher and vote. things you should do. it don'y matter how long you been here you aint done shit since you have. but don't take it personal. you in ya feelings like these hoes

CAMROK:

Gonna make 'flash', crash like he's in the middle of World War II
'Khmerboiz' what the fuck kinda name is that for a crew
Not a bad opener, good imagery of the WWII
Produce rhymes so sick, like bird droppings on ur head passin
The shit slides down ur face, flash.. are you Micheal Jackson?
lol, nice punch
Your little brother doesn't know if ur 'black or white'
I guess that doesn't change the fact u like it small and tight
Came off a good punch, made this one look played out and weak
Man, that shits not right, ur brother, are you retarded?
Ur probably the culprit, then looks around the room and asks who farted
Kinda a dry humor, ok nonetheless
U started this shit, and now your getting discarded
Put down the pen & paper, from this u can't be guarded
Ok punch, nice flow here
It's like a lightning strike, except you see no 'flashes'
wake up next morning, with CAMROK spelled on you in gashes
your done, just took this battle and placed it in the ashes
Good personal punch, good closer


flash:

I'm 'diss-interested' in 'dissin' this kid, dismissin his shit
disinterested in lettin him live...
Sick multi, good opener
livin for killin these kids, these scripts be written in sigs....
only 'flow' that you know is the 'spit'-in ya bib
lol, nice
the only 'hard'ness within, is the 'dick' in your ribs
Now I see how you 'rip shit'....I'll rip ya lips from ya chin
Good flow, ok punch
distilled my spit, and yet im sick of dis still
sick cuz i'm ill, I've been inflicted wit skill
Nice wordplay, especially the first line
he tasted 'hate' for a minute as i 'pissed' in his grill
picture per-fect when I have this bitch cuffed to the back of a movin hearse-its
murder in the first
Interesting style change, it fits, and yet it doesnt
hit high speed, as I watched his eyes bleed, crazed to see his spleen burst
dragged this fag over broken glass till the blood from his inside started to drip from his ass
Stepped out for a second, to teach him lesson, heel to his 'nuts'...now whos 'cummin' in last?
Dang, nice closer and finish


Personally, I think that Flash took this with a much better approach and more creativity. This was not easy, and CAMROK, keep doin what u do, flash just brought it too hard. Vote-flash .. peace, and nice job to both, loved this one!

Check this one out:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111789