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02-03-04, 08:06 PM
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Tell Me..
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02-03-04, 08:48 PM
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Yea man you came way too basic.....I mean.....If you look at his picture you might get the wrong impression...but.....meh.....check it....you had personals but they were weak and at times even played.....parts of your verse are stretched your trying to say to much dog....throw a quick jab and be out....its not a story of how much the kid sux its witty commentary on why your better.....and why he suxs...you tried to pack to much in if you would have shortened your lines....come with harder more personal...like embarrasing material and clearly stated your points you would've taken it.....keep battlin with this knowledge and you will elevate.........pz love for the fam
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02-03-04, 08:52 PM
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I Feel Ya
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02-03-04, 09:44 PM
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Work on punches...Make 'em hit hard..
Thats what mainly takes battles... But people now a days look at structure So make sure your structure is good...
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02-03-04, 10:18 PM
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nuj let me tell you like this kid, that kind of verse would work good
in a real life battle cause you gotta have alot to say...but on the net... i guess "you have to make harder punches" just shorten your bars up a lil bit though...thats about it, oh and make bars same lenght.. and say shit nobody would ever think about saying
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02-03-04, 11:17 PM
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LMFAO....
Nuj is Fatal Mirage aka.... a bunch of banned names.. LMFAO.... 24 Karat is back..LMFAO.. Aight... choke attack.. Nick why'd you have to tell me? Do you really have to tell everyone...its not nice to do that just because you can, if its a claim then go to I.R. -Emerge LoL... Emerge.. i kno that kid personally He tried gettin me banned a few weeks ago.. But it backfired on him, and he got banned. He tried namin all my old names, which were banned and i was forgivin for my "Inappropriate" actions And Token handled the claim, and explained i was forgivin And then exposed all of this alias's... and banned him
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02-04-04, 01:00 AM
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Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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Creativity in your punches and personals are always good. Thats one thing I look for in battles
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02-04-04, 01:48 AM
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well i wont repeat what these guys have said..but
go to the tutorials...they should help |
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02-04-04, 06:16 AM
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K Emerge.. Question has been answer'd, several times
Shouldn't you close this like you do every other thread.. LoL
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02-04-04, 08:28 AM
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You're Like Melon
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Nuj not Anuj... i dont even know who 24 is..
illunatic what are you talking about though? (holler on aim sometime telling me why yall hoes got beef) 
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02-04-04, 12:08 PM
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