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Old 02-04-04, 04:37 PM   #1
Witeout
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gansta is not why i wanted to be, all i wanted is some breast to feed,
and thats all i want or need. talking to girls and playing their heads even bullshitting the ones who want to be wed/ but truth is i just want to bed and if they want more that shit is dead. enough about treating a lady like a lady/lets have sex/listen to shady. ready to kiss you tits and even play you boyfriend with the zits, man you easy in bed /life must be the pits. but i love girls who are fit/ and i dont like girls who dont give brains one bit.

and all yall haters/ see you laters/ cuz i got no time for you ugly eye gators.
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Old 02-04-04, 09:39 PM   #2
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From: ...Tha darkest corner of a lil boi's Mind...
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normlly i dont do this but i cant give u a respectable responce merely cus this peice wasnt sumthin i could respect...but thas juss my words...-shi-
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Every lil boi is born shi......their ignorance makes them bold......

simply put"...wise words whisperd to deaf ears as no one hears the blurred proverbs that're always spoken clear so i fuckin swear that my where wont be here as time tolls..." second verse of 'Elevate' written by -shi-
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Old 02-05-04, 06:57 PM   #3
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From: Bermy
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it's cool.. a lil too basic on the rhyme scheme but it got the point across... Good luck and keep elevating
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Old 02-05-04, 09:11 PM   #4
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This was an open mic or something. Not meant to be in here. PM me if you think it should be re-opened.

CLOSED for now.
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