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Mona Lisa.
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The Creation ( B.I.D & Allegory ) | House Of Horrors
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House of Horrors-The Creation
B.I.D *Kinda silent for my liking..yo Al’ where ya @? Fuck..wheres the door? Shit..wot was that? Ahhh.. Somebody..he’ uh* The things that go bump in the night outta sight Here to freight, grabbin ya soul, grasping it Tight Still I cant find the Light, only one sense in Use Its so fuckin’ scary I’m suffering Mental Abuse Time to Fuse..my fear..and let a scream Out If Peace came in water I’d be handling a Drought Looking about..bewildered by the Pitch darkness Begging for a glimmer but its Utterly Sparkless Sightless..cataract Vision..w/ Breathless Submission Ignoring superstition..i jus wait it out & Listen To the Hissin..& to the Horrors of this House I’d shout to the Rafters but I lost my word of Mouth My Churning goes South..of ripped up Insides Anatomy feels deteriorated..by what lies Behind In due Kind..i feel a breath touch the surface of Skin While my will runs away.. inturn to my next of Kin Is it a Sin?. .overzealous thought? Or jus an Illusion? Or pent up Anxiety that’s jus locked up Confusion Finally turn around to hopefully see wot may Lye Exasperation…a fate of a laugh or I may Die! *upto you wot happens next du with it wot ya will* Al' Can You Feel It In The Air, The Mysterious Mist That Scares And Scars Creatures Wail To The Stars With Features That’re Layered In The Dark Prepare For The Arc And Story-Caper From Allegory The Vader About The Mission To The House Of An 18th Century Mayor Who’d Been Known From Keeping Young Boys In His Cellar At Night Orphans And Homeless Children, Chained And Deprived Of Light And The Rumors Of What He Did To Them, He Didn’t Dare To Say But He’d Been Getting Calls That Noises Were Being Heard In The Day Postmen And Women Delivered Packages To The Houses Next Door And Said They Saw Little Fingers Coming Out Of The Porches Floor Boards Of The Old Mayors House, But When They Turned It Was Deathly Quiet And When They Peeked In The Blackened Windows, There Was Nothing Inside It So We Got The Call October 16, Brixton And KoNcept Were Busy And Jacent Was So Rusty He Couldn’t Spit Shit If His Ass Lip Sinced So We Jetted, It Was Late, But We Had To See What We Could Find We Thought Of Asking Some Neighbors, But Suddenly, They Shut All Their Blinds I Went To Knock, But The Door Opened Itself, I Guess From The Wind We Stepped In, A Wall Formed Behind Us Where The Door Had Once Been -The Creation
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Yeah mate....wot!!!!!!!!
Ill as fuck!!!!!!!!!!!!! Like this piece majorly.....Props all round! 9/10 |
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Nice~~~~B.I..your structure was perfect..great scheme and great imagery..and for Allegory..you verse was also very nice..you had a good flow going on..although it seemed a bit choppy at some parts..your imagery was nice..but..I think B.I...verse was so nice it took the shine away from you(Damn him!)...anyway nice work fellas..peace...^^
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Mona Lisa.
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