Omarion:
I got everything I want in life expect a girlfriend...

The Realist:
Grafted to my arm when ever I paid for girl night out
Should have smoked cigar now
On how your attitude was born, bound to say words
Just mad cause you got served
You just make me ignore everything from the throat up
Bitch I thought we broke up
Keep talking more stuff, introducing me like I'm the X
And I'm Immature? Grow up
Seen you nicely dressed everywhere these last few days
And I give you the right way
You say all I wanted was sex, who took you to B2K
I never got you home late
Even with your bithchy attitude I never got mad at you
Yet you switch to my tattoo
Voice raised an octave because I don’t praise your look
Sounding like a Pharell hook

Stop reaching for my face
You just lost the race
Cause just like b2k
You just got replaced!

B2K:
Girlfriend...
I need a girlfriend
A faithful girlfriend
A playful girlfriend
With plenty of friends
I need a girlfriend
Girlfriend...

Fine TR..you know what..You can be my girlfriend...how does that sound?
I'm going to be Omarion..say it with me..you suckaz just got served!!!

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Soft Focus
Suicide Inc.
RhymeVantage
Def.Ill
Ghost-Writers

Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..

Lmao @ the ending..Dope piece, funny as fuck. I mixed the beat but I caught the flow, This was funny as hell

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Only God can judge me, Who THE FUCK IS YOU?!

Word.. This made me laugh. Lmao at the B2K theme.

Not bad flow.

Not much to comment on but umm.. yeah.. stay up.

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Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

lmao wherever that came from.

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feedback?

Lmao @ This

On how your attitude was born, bound to say words
Just mad cause you got served

Ahha - Funny Shit, Made Me Laugh.

i really liked the mimatuere line adn the concept was orginal wich is walyas a place man plus i thought tthat the immatere line was good too

haha..i laughed my fucking ass off..it goes with the song and it's just plain funny...that's all, no more no less, just funny. good job guys

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this wasnt meant to be funny

^^^^^^^
ROTFLMMFAO OH SHYT maddness... thats all that needs to be said... maddness

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~Sitting In Elevation Position~


Free
Agent

Just A Sick Newbie

Murked - Lust

Lost - None

Actually feels like a real rap verse to me man .. I was thinkin' 'bout makin' my own remix to that shit .. Verse was dope tho .. Know exactly wat U talkin' 'bout duke .. U should get into audio man .. Would be dope on that beat I think to listen to ..

i thought this was great..TR..I know you said these wasn't meant to be funny,but damn at it was...LMao..and B2K ended with the great closer..LMao

Fool that's the actuall hook from the song ..

^I know...I was being Sarcastic...^^