nightly wonders

.. there is something when you look above at night
something about those little dimonds that shine so bright
not only does it form the most interasting question
it reduces the existance of man into a tiny fraction
every suggestion we have about this unknown world
how is it connected to us? a elephant? a bird?
It must have a connection... what does it all mean
how can we beggin to suggest- when moon is the furtherst we been
and inbetween these thoughts there is a worry
is death the end of this beatifull story?
As we advance the civilization - and our world becomes smaller
thousands of years ahead are we gonna be standing taller
closer to these stars - these mysterious dots
or like a convict behind barz- still trap in our own thoughts
is it all just a deception - maybe its not real
maybe we never acctualy touch - we just think we feel
these questions come out redicules - but what is not
.. looking from those bright stars... we are just a dot

uppin for some feedback

uppn

yo this is reely gud, ive actually put alotta thought into this topic in perticular, wat if the entire world is jusst imaginary, and its all there for you, like some one else is ona different planet or sumn and they just think they see you but they see you different than u c them o well i like this one.........especiall the way it ended!!!!!! gud imagery, keep it up n keep droppin!!!!!!!

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these questions come out redicules - but what is not
.. looking from those bright stars... we are just a dot

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