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JMH | 0 | 0% | |
Quelude | 5 | 100.00% | |
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02-11-04, 02:06 PM | #1 | |
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Quelude vs JMH
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30 min no b/s You first. |
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02-11-04, 02:21 PM | #2 | ||
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aight my first battle in here...i'll try and adapt to the rapbattle stle
dumb guy thought he could stand up to this challenge saw my rhyme stepped back and lost his balance wouldnt out shine J with spits if ye wore lip-stick is he holding hotness?nah the kid grips shit suprising nobody bites your lines coz all em "fillers" you wanna see pussy take a glance at the mirror lyrics like un-needed maths teachers coz they sir- plus to requirements this aint no formula one break but i'll have him re-tyreing its like bullied midgets coz he not "up" for this fight miss with my left then your face getting stuck with my right your good lyrics unheard perhaps coz each verse is filled with dumb words its like i beat you at losing my virginity the way i cum first |
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02-11-04, 02:42 PM | #3 | ||
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what did you mean when you said 30 min? 30 minutes to post my rhyme?...................................
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02-11-04, 02:49 PM | #4 | |
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You've got a braveheart like Gibson..but an actor just the same.
But Dope is a role you can't pull off..Your casted as lame Let me show you the ropes...start with the one around ya throat there Stand on a chair to get on my level..I'll kick it and hang ya ass in mid-air While you stuck on the level I attained... and elevated from I'll make you my son..celebrate your birth and death..one verse Son. I got no personals at all for you..you're still just a newb Who talks shit and swallows spit..mouth still attached to the boob Your death will be another notch... for my winning streak Like I slid across the gym floor without moving my feet Dumb kid...from the burbs..trying to make himself Hood Rich Who couldn't "wet" my appetite for a battle even if he could spit |
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02-11-04, 02:50 PM | #5 | |
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Don't worry about it...we both came in under our time constraints.
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02-11-04, 03:02 PM | #6 | ||
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dumb guy thought he could stand up to this challenge
saw my rhyme stepped back and lost his balance blah..no punch... wouldnt out shine J with spits if ye wore lip-stick is he holding hotness?nah the kid grips shit suprising nobody bites your lines coz all em "fillers" you wanna see pussy take a glance at the mirror filler and played rhymes lyrics like un-needed maths teachers coz they sir- plus to requirements this aint no formula one break but i'll have him re-tyreing weak meta and punch its like bullied midgets coz he not "up" for this fight miss with my left then your face getting stuck with my right played your good lyrics unheard perhaps coz each verse is filled with dumb words its like i beat you at losing my virginity the way i cum first sex shit is mad played dawg You've got a braveheart like Gibson..but an actor just the same. But Dope is a role you can't pull off..Your casted as lame decent...u already beat hime with this punch/meta Let me show you the ropes...start with the one around ya throat there Stand on a chair to get on my level..I'll kick it and hang ya ass in mid-air played While you stuck on the level I attained... and elevated from I'll make you my son..celebrate your birth and death..one verse Son. ok I got no personals at all for you..you're still just a newb Who talks shit and swallows spit..mouth still attached to the boob whack Your death will be another notch... for my winning streak Like I slid across the gym floor without moving my feet ok//kinda weak tho Dumb kid...from the burbs..trying to make himself Hood Rich Who couldn't "wet" my appetite for a battle even if he could spit ok Que took this easy..he threw punches...JMH only had filler..no real punches......check out WEC to get battle tips man...Que a kinda weak verse from what I've seen before..but still enough to beat JMH PLease drop an honest vote here guys..thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113550 |
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02-11-04, 03:11 PM | #7 | ||
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i dont need no tips ive been text battling for 3 months and got plentywins, but the style of layout is very different here and i didnt know how much quality to put down coz i aint seen him battle....your break down was unfair...bar 1 for example you said there was no punch when there was, key word"stand up" but whateva ,nice verse quelude
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02-11-04, 03:13 PM | #8 | ||
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i liked quelude shit his at least had some decent punches
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02-11-04, 03:21 PM | #9 | ||
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next time i will explain my lines so you get the punches
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02-11-04, 03:26 PM | #10 | |
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Count this as an up as well...
JMH...Don't put explanations anywhere..it's newbish. Just keep dropping..your shit was O.K. you just need to elevate..also..opinions differ..some people value different things when it comes to voting so just chill and let them speak..you can't change their minds..if it's unfair report it to Investiagted Reports..other than that...let's keep the votes coming and drop ya links. |
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02-11-04, 04:05 PM | #11 | ||
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drop what links?you want a link to an ill verse i dropped yesterday in another forum?
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02-11-04, 04:08 PM | #12 | ||
Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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No hate to you man..but I dun care how many wins you have...ALways drop dope...dun blame it on not know ing your opponent..And ya first bar was weak..a mad played punch...No offense..jus an honest vote
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02-11-04, 04:11 PM | #13 | |
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quelude won this.......
but both verses were hella weak work on it |
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02-11-04, 06:18 PM | #14 | |
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Uppin.
Post and Drop a Link. Quelude vs. Jmh |
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02-11-04, 06:36 PM | #15 | ||
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JMH
dumb guy thought he could stand up to this challenge saw my rhyme stepped back and lost his balance -filler,metiphore = 3 wouldnt out shine J with spits if ye wore lip-stick is he holding hotness?nah the kid grips shit metiphore,-wrong = 2 suprising nobody bites your lines coz all em "fillers" you wanna see pussy take a glance at the mirror personal,punch = 6 lyrics like un-needed maths teachers coz they sir- plus to requirements this aint no formula one break but i'll have him re-tyreing metiphore,-strectched,-played = 3 its like bullied midgets coz he not "up" for this fight miss with my left then your face getting stuck with my right metiphore,-played,punch = 3 your good lyrics unheard perhaps coz each verse is filled with dumb words its like i beat you at losing my virginity the way i cum first multi,metiphore,-played You could not come more played than this. half your verse, maybe a lil less, like 3 lines had majorly played concepts like the re-tire,cum first,and midgets line. You really need to step away from the radio and do this on your own. Be more creative. Overall = 17 --------------------------- Quelude You've got a braveheart like Gibson..but an actor just the same. But Dope is a role you can't pull off..Your casted as lame metiphore,wordplay,punch = 8 Let me show you the ropes...start with the one around ya throat there Stand on a chair to get on my level..I'll kick it and hang ya ass in mid-air metiphore,punch = 5 While you stuck on the level I attained... and elevated from I'll make you my son..celebrate your birth and death..one verse Son. -self hype,wordplay,metiphore = 6 I got no personals at all for you..you're still just a newb Who talks shit and swallows spit..mouth still attached to the boob multi,personal,metiphore = 6 Your death will be another notch... for my winning streak Like I slid across the gym floor without moving my feet -self hype,wordplay = 5 Dumb kid...from the burbs..trying to make himself Hood Rich Who couldn't "wet" my appetite for a battle even if he could spit personal,punch,metiphore = 6 Alot better than JMH. Very nice opener, kina dissapointed me tho, cus after that no lines were as good as that one. Besides that line I'd say a very average verse. But then again, you probly seen what was dropped before you. Ok drop. I think you can do alot better if you keep the heat up consistantly. Overal = 36 --------------------------- Vote = Quelude Drop an honest vote here http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...242#post1173242 |
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