yo i know all my other drops were shit but im tryin really!

/chourus/

ure a faggit,u cant hack it
this is the turtle race and im the rabbit(X2)


im robb a/k/a the rabbit
you cant rap 4 shit ure a faggit
on the mic i drop bombs like my name was sadam
i maybe pysically weak but im lyrically strong
i cud keep it short or i cud keep it quite long
i pull these word like a bullet from a gun
sum times i do it seriously,sumtimes 4 fun

/chorus/

ure a faggit,u cnt hack it
this is the turtle race and im the rabbit


my head ringing like it was a spider sense tinglin
like green bay wen they shitted on new england
im outa tha game put the 2nd string in
this brandys gt me bobbin back and forth like a penguin
delinquent
tottin mics withe broken english
make ya momma be like
"oh this is good who sings this"

/chorus/

ure a faggit,u cant hack it
this is the turtle race and im the rabbit


theres 3 things i h8: girls women and bitches
im that viscious to talk up and drop kick midgets
this dandruff is making my neck itch
wot the fuck gimmie my check bitch
yeah u just lost ya tip thres a hair in my breakfast
i give all you rapsingers 2 middle fingers and flip u of in french and translate it into english


yeah holla back and tell me wot ya think!!!

Since you been mcing since you seven, this was appauling, whether your 10 or 20, this was very dissapointing to read, i read this because the name looked so noobish i thought it was going to be good, but it was soo lame, i'm sorry to hurt your feelings or w.e, but this wasn't very good, write ALOT more and elevate.

fair comment

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