fuck ya pussies with no heart get bent quick
talking manure get ya shit hit quick leave ya leg with a limp
swearing you iller than the rest and gotta take leave
from ya job and get much needed bed rest for heaven's sake leave
already postin ya played lines like hop scotch claiming to be corey (quarry) the way they proclaim they got rocks when tha bittin gonna stop drop ya own shit be original for once b4 ya turn out to be a fake underground digital ponce
most y'all prolly won't even make the cut you provisional cunts couldn't spit flames if ya said "f" lames with a torch dreamin to the best didn't you kno' this ain't no bitch sport like the wnba this ain't the place to talk about ya blues like crips in court this is where you get cut from the team don't need no virgins on the mic and gettin butt from the dreams that are wet don't count cuz all that's gonna happen is you gonna get kill by on-par vets and fucked like online starlettes.

I tried sumthing alittle different to see if it works so sum feedback would be appreciate greatly

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Start and finish were both tight. Some of the middle seemed a little off. I like your topic - commented on it myself in "Cud". Several very nice lines in there.

"gettin butt from the dreams that are wet don't count cuz all that's gonna happen is you gonna get kill by on-par vets and fucked like online starlettes."

Nice closer. Keep it up.

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