Agaisnt a Kid Named BLuNTeD

well he really "Wants-It-Wit-Me-Bad" u cant "See His Complexion" like hes "Covered-in-Ski-Masks" but he couldnt "Blaze a Track" like "Blunted's-in-REHAB"!!//
fans be "Lovin-These-Raps" so ill "Plant This Herb" like i "Shovel-the-Seeds-Back" cuz ill take "Blunt" like im "Runnin-wit-His-Weed-Stash"!!//1
then hell have his "Cabinets-Empty" then ill "Hit Blunted So Hard" ill be "Laughin-n-Giddy" but it'll knock him "Back-to-the-Sixtys"!!! Where "Blunt" was "Cracked-by-The-Hippies" //
u "From Str8 Off Da Block"? u scared to "Rap-in-the-City" thats y u need "Practice-to-Rip-Me" to beat me? "Pull Something Outta Your Sleeve" but not even "Magic-could-Trick-Me"!!//2
ill have blunted saying Riz's "Raps-are-Sickening" he isnt "Mad-at-me-Is-He?" battle riz? "HUSTON we have a Problem" like hes "Hasseling-Whitney"!!// (Whitney Huston)
ill be "Standin Tall" if a "Catastrophe-Hit-Me" battling riz is "No Good" liek a "Track-Team-Lifting" u wouldnt "GET ANOTHER SHOT" if u were "BATTLING-FIFTY"!!//3 (Shot 9 Times)
"Blunts" in a cypher cuase im "Passin-Him-Quickly" ur "Text Wouldnt Get Big" If it was "Caps-from-the-Shift-Key" ull "BE-LEAVIN" this thread like "Broadcasts-on-Ripleys"!!// (Be Leaving-believing)
ur punches couldnt "Manage-to-Hit-Me" cuz i got the "Heads Up" like i got "Giraffes-With-Me" but after i "Own You" ull "Be My Slave" like "African-History"!!// 4

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up this please..what u think

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feedbak??....like 303 peple on and not a reply all day

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this was koo..i like the structure an some punches was ight...

what am i suppose to do its my first time

this site is cool and has mad people so please dont sleep

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what he sed^^^^^^^^^...............................

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Punches sucked.

Lose all of the speech marks and hypens, because if you need them to single out the key segments of your punches, then it's clear your punches suck. Keep that in mind, bro.

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some of this was confusing sum of the punches were played and made no sense it looks like you used similes but you more complex ones cuz sum of them were simple other than that it was alright and you need to battle this blunted kid

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