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02-13-04, 11:51 PM
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New to RB
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new nucca
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its da kid from jersey who wants da beef\
my pearly whites stay shinin like platnium teeth\ nuccas tryin to look pretty pink Ts\ keep on my dark on dark valurals and dark colored Ts\ i cant stand being on da grind never got da time shine\ thats what i bust more guns than asian nef from True Crime\ yeah i got da right mind\ been spittin since i was nine\ nobody can take my flow\ damn its simply mine\ giv me some damn tips i'll holla back  |
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02-13-04, 11:55 PM
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PuRe AzN..
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elevate.. not lookin to good just up vocab.. i dont know umm learn more harder stuf to rhyme like
i want it more than less kid/ dont answer rhewtorical questions/ ^^^ that makes it more interesting.. dont use that it was from one of my drops or soon to be drops ohh yeah dont diss asians lol work on it hit this shit up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113891
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02-13-04, 11:57 PM
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lackin a lot of content, wordplay, metahz, etc .
all i can say is elevate
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02-17-04, 08:05 PM
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it was an okay post but it's needs more bars and lines other than that it's you just to manage elevation
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02-17-04, 08:20 PM
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Yo Shit Was Straight Fuck What Niggas Dissin Say....
Put It Like This... Your New... And Competition... Fuck Em.. Cuz They Gone Diss It Anyway. Heres The Best Tip I Can Throw Yo Way... Never Change "you" For Anybody.... Holla At Cha Boy... 
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Im tight with the steal dude, but you can look in my eyes and see for yourself I don't need one to kill you.
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02-17-04, 11:52 PM
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Banned: Spamming
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Wow...you should...spit on your self...or..just...hang your self.....or....just...die bitch............have a nice day...
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02-17-04, 11:59 PM
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Suspended Suspense
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^^what he said, and for good measure have them cremate you...
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02-18-04, 12:24 AM
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Old School Sexy...
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^ and make sure no ones in the room so they dont get "sick" from your "ill rhymes"
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