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02-17-04, 10:18 AM | #1 | ||
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First try
IP:
ok this is my first try...so keep that in mind...i have otha beats but they take so long to upload this is the only one so far on my page *shrugs* w/e
called: Ba Boom i realize there is a crap section at like 1:17 but ima work to fix that.... so leave feed an ill return the favor
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02-17-04, 10:39 AM | #2 | ||
GONE... I QUIT
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IP:
ok ok... im the last person to be critiquesing people but.. it wasn't that bad, a little repetitive, but thats ok, a couple my beats are a lil repetitive.. like the guy sayin im the shit or wutever he was saying, so being it ur first beat, i give it a 7/10 for a first try www.soundclick.com/sdizzlerecords
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02-17-04, 01:40 PM | #3 | ||
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IP:
This is really good, especially for a first try. That pizzicato string sounds off-key at times, though.
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02-17-04, 03:37 PM | #4 | ||
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IP:
thnx a lot... yea a first try.... n e feed is worth havin
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CuZ Im PoEtIcAlLy UnStOpPaBlE
Read My Shit & Gimme Respect
I.J.L. Liberating All From Whack Ass Rhymes
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02-17-04, 07:26 PM | #5 | ||
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IP:
uppy up up
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~â€-LiBeRaTe Me!â€-~
CuZ Im PoEtIcAlLy UnStOpPaBlE
Read My Shit & Gimme Respect
I.J.L. Liberating All From Whack Ass Rhymes
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02-17-04, 07:28 PM | #6 | ||
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IP:
imma check this out right now... brb
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02-17-04, 07:29 PM | #7 | ||
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IP:
is that a tupac sample of him laughing?
anyways... the piano is gay. get rid of it or change the sound. the rest is pretty cool but it just sounds like 2 loops!!! not bad for first time but you should take out the piano.
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02-17-04, 08:57 PM | #8 | ||
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IP:
laughing? theres no laughing on the track an yea it does get a bit repetative...an the piano was in to kinda soften it i guess u could say
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CuZ Im PoEtIcAlLy UnStOpPaBlE
Read My Shit & Gimme Respect
I.J.L. Liberating All From Whack Ass Rhymes
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02-17-04, 09:53 PM | #9 | ||
Flyweight
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IP:
is that pac though... a sample of him? it just sounds like a "ah-hah"
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