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02-21-04, 11:05 AM | #1 | ||
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A Diss Track / Call Out
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This is a 'Call-Out' track aimed at this bitch 'Dark' from another site.
It's only a 1:30 long, so listen to it, and post your feedback please. Call'n Out Dark
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02-21-04, 12:59 PM | #2 | ||
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Yo this was kinda lacking the punches all around...
ya flow is kinda choppy... it's coo, i'm not saying it's wack, but you do need to work on it.. Ya audio vocie is pretty coo, I think you need to stop using so much filters on it tho... Kinda sounds like your made from a sound effect, Get what i'm saying? Well this was an average diss, nothing really to make me go like "Whoa, Oh shit!!!" But coo shit
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02-21-04, 01:48 PM | #3 | ||
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IP:
^ thx for the feedback.
1. I didn't use filters on my voice in the whole thing. I doubled up my voice on some words for emphasis, and recorded about 3 layers. 2. There were personals in there, you'd have to be on the site to understand. It is just a call-out. 3. I spit the whole thing at once, except the second lil verse I re-recorded. Some, not all was free-styled, I only wrote a couple of the multies and punchlines, cuz I was really in a rush. A full version of the diss-track will be up in a few days, weather he excepts the call-out or not. I'll post it when it's complete. Thx again for the feedback, I'll check your music when I'm off work. peaCe.
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02-22-04, 01:17 PM | #4 | ||
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IP:
wow this site is inactive.
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02-22-04, 04:03 PM | #5 | ||
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IP:
that was cool shit at least you did somethin different not like us just reduced to typin.\
it was pretty cool |
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02-24-04, 10:40 PM | #6 | ||
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i liked this... it was prretty decent..needs some work but you have a solid foundation for a good track... please check my thread..its on the fourm a few down/up i believe
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02-24-04, 10:42 PM | #7 | ||
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i liked this... it was prretty decent..needs some work but you have a solid foundation for a good track... please check my thread in the beats section...good lookin..
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03-19-04, 01:42 AM | #8 | |
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as an artist- i respect what your doin
as a promoter- work on your shit a little more, you're on the right track
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