aight the rules are 10/ 20 lines three votes wins
no bitten

no hate votes
blind spit
15 mins

yo a vantriliquist lirycist, well that exactly wat it seems,
wat im staten is yo rymes u dont be makin theres a ghost writer deep within the scenes,
so im gonna make like CSI and detect where this textual rymers lab is at,
then im gonna crush his whole thesis and toss him out dis verbal habitat,
imagine that, cuzim a ill rymer, crime fighter, lyrical mc.guiver,
but you still couldnt get my flows if they were an adidiction,
cuz my rymes cumn hotta than condums maken friction,
but you couldnt face the facts if you was confronted by fiction,
my prediction, is that you shouldnt be on this sight cuz yo pitiful,
then i'll take all yo hoes,cuz i turn mo heads than a physical,
look you makin me spit first so you time to flee,
but i'll chop off yo knees so you cant run from me,
now lets see how this cool guy handles him self under da pressure,
cuz im like an SAT that will lyrically test ya.


aight look that was off the top off the head so keep that in mind

my bad it took a lil longer than 15 because i had to proof read and shit so i'll let you take as long as you need, but try tohave it finished as soon as possible

where is you at why is you takin so l;ong for this is un called for

no worrys, gibberish has come back to rap,
he's gunna beat all these wonna be's that r all crap,
u think ur gunna beat me with that shit,
how could ya ur punches didnt even hurt a bit,
u talked bout i'm pitterful well ill prove u wrong,
well ya better stop lying cause ur nose is gettin to long,
i made ya spit first to c if ya got the balls,
i no y now cause im driven u up the walls,
i my last 2 lines im gunna get it dun and dusted,
u better give up now cause ur gunna b busted,
so long sucker!



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yo this one im gonna have to give to d.j for his vocab, punches, and the way it flowed .... aight buy gibberish you had som ecoo stuff too but just not feelin it man....next time wokr a lil more on yo vocab cuz what you wrote was just to simple for me...but they but was coo for newbs ill admit...and also d.j work on your multis and personals a lil mroe as well...

my vote-D.j em sce

uuuppppiiinnn 4 votes and dats one 4 me so we still lookin 4 mo

lets hav all ya vote..................................

talkin gibberish u 4got about r battle fam, but as for this one im goin wit dj liked the flow better

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gebberish good rhyme pattern but extremely childish, vocab too limited
need more qaulity punches 2/10

d. j em clearly a very easy win, good tactics
7/10

uppin for votes..............i got dis one in the bag

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This was really one-sided. Gibberish displayed confidence and not a whole lot else. Dj em sce held all the concepts, wordplay, creative rhymes and punches. Nowhere close to an even match.

Um...Gibberish went out there talked, Herbish rhyming SHIT - Gibberish is definetly right!

D.J Em Sce... Tyte i enjoyed it, Exeptional for a blind spit - Full of multi's, wordplay, and flow...thumbs up.

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