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Old 03-06-04, 12:06 PM   #1
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I'll finish this latah

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I bust tough,and to make it worse, it's automatic/
these words can be heard wit no static/
rhymes so dope, they make a crazy man panic/
I don't believe in begs, thats just askin fo more/
when I die burry me in the earths core, cause i'm already used to hell/
i'm livin it right here, which is which is hard to tell/
yall belong on top of a church cause when yall see me yall tremble like bells/
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Old 03-06-04, 05:59 PM   #2
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some dope shit. you should go to the frontlines and beat some cats.
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Old 03-07-04, 02:23 AM   #3
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thanx. anybody else?
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Old 03-07-04, 12:57 PM   #4
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nice metaphores. i likes this flow, keep on bustin on open mic. try to go for the frontlines. check out some of my shit.
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Old 03-13-04, 11:26 AM   #6
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Your Wak As Hell. Stop Rappin I Didnt Like It. Your Wacker Than Chingy.

J/k Much Love. From Demolish.
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Old 03-13-04, 11:41 AM   #7
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dis wasnt dat good...for one it was to short...no flow or mulitpus.....ok for a newb i guess...keep dropin
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