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Old 03-09-04, 08:35 AM   #1
VitaL
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HoLLaH aTCHa Boi!


Callin me atheist - I don’t believe in u God/
I’m leavin u scarred, torched whit nothing left to bombard/
Killin u hard, parts left in different bags so I can eat when they charred/
Devoured like cards, u thought an ace was walkin but was cut like lard/
Hearts get broke like bitches on two - fourteen/
Two full steam is whut they face, now feel my regime/
Fast and easy I’ll turn u ugly for the last time/
Endin ur kind whit these bars before I’m behind mine (again?)/
I’m cannibalistic, Hannibal of my day – both a genius and artistic/
I paint a picture well, so gruesome and sadistic/
I’m swift whit the flow so u neva know who left u twisted/
Drugs plus u whut’s that called - addicted?/
Well I’m the narc, the Noah’s arc whit two of a kind/
So if I miss once, the next comin will make u blind/
U can call me the Flash, my endless punches are too fast/
I’ll beat u so bad, ur rank will drop from first to last/


blahhhhh... a lil sumthin sumthin
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Old 03-09-04, 01:37 PM   #2
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yo......you bit that first line from busta rhymes "Anarchy" ablum dawg..........what's up with that? And don't deny it cause I'll drop the link..........
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Old 03-09-04, 02:08 PM   #3
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didnt bite it... its already known... n its not word for word...

i tossed a flow off it.

So lemme clarify for ya'll...

Good looks to Busta Rhymes for puttin that line in my head for me to flow off of.

Now... since this lil key isnt copywrited... there is no harm in using a startin line.
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Leave ya ass trapped ina tire like the "Michellin Baby"..
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Old 03-09-04, 02:53 PM   #4
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that's still bitin dawg................................
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Old 03-10-04, 07:52 AM   #5
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lol... arite...

so i guess u call
(Mainstream50, BIG, Pac, Eminem, Dre, Jay Z, Kanye West, Mobb Deep, etc.
(UndergroundDiSSaster aka ViS MajoR, Tonedeff, Copywrite, Jaylacage, Lootchiano, Invasion, etc.

All biters as well?

Dont get me wrong... i aint gettin mad... but do u even know whut a biter is?

Its takin a line(s) and claimin its urs. Im not claimin its mine. lol....
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Old 03-10-04, 06:09 PM   #6
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Actually it was the "Genisis" album
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Old 03-11-04, 10:34 AM   #7
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^^^ lol... i meant to correct that too..

anyways... anyone care to picc me up?

ima topical/horrorcore textcee.
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Old 03-11-04, 03:56 PM   #8
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Try out for PSA. Under Crew Forums.
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Old 03-12-04, 09:15 PM   #9
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dude pm me and i can hook u up
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Old 03-12-04, 09:30 PM   #10
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Actually............you wouldn't have said anything unless I would have caught it............but whatever..........I don't care...................good luck on findin a crew...........oh yeah.............did you use to be on EmceeBatlleRaps?
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Old 03-15-04, 09:41 AM   #11
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Actually............you wouldn't have said anything unless I would have caught it............but whatever..........I don't care...................good luck on findin a crew...........oh yeah.............did you use to be on EmceeBatlleRaps?



Yes... that used to be my site.

And it was hacked...
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Old 03-15-04, 09:29 AM   #12
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