Afterword vs. Furoshis

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"afterword disperses divert blirts to quench ya thirst"

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if u dont respond i understand, just work a lil harder, you'll get there

Afterwords flow is very potent, wen it’s spoken
Like Cali dro, wen u smoke it/
Got repellent for non-flowin, FUROSHIS rodents
That aint even focus, I’m hoping this guy is joking/
Please tell me on what E have you been rollin
2 make u think u can compete wit me flowin/
I maneuver around manure quick
Like I knew u were full of shit/
So please, go clean yur colon, it’s swollen
And I’m exposing you wit lyrics that leave ya open
Provoking, u 2 reconsider rap, and find a seat in the back
Remember real men wear black, and the real LA kings are back
With a vengeance, but fuc Sac, this is business
This is man on man combat, & u kant combat the fact
That yur defenseless, to my relentless, coinciding sentences
Entice us wit some different shit or else we aint listenin

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"afterword disperses divert blirts to quench ya thirst"

bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1)

Help me close these/ and I will help U
an EYE 4 an EYE
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271

i dint need to respond bcuz when i flow shit blows like napalm//
n when i explode i corrode leaven hoes fallin to the floo cuz they cant stay calm// floo=floor
im a let u b the eye witness that i aint defenseless n ur shit is senseless//
when im done every nigga will be listenin cuz my shit be glistenin//
so ya betta listen in cuz when im done youll be needin a christenin//
n dis is tray-six so dont get ur shit in a twist like cake mix//
wit transfix sticks in ur lips ima make ur bullshit quit//
yo bother me like ticks so to solve this conflict this what i predict//
u picked the wrong convict to inflict wit//
n this like mortal kombat cept i make the fatality reality//
n wit my imortality ima leave yo ass in hospitality makin u the only nigga on RB wit abnormality//

just lil off da top .......now les get some votes.........

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yo also i thought u said no more than twelve lines.............

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coo im loven the multies from furoshis but could have used alil mo meta4s but that was enuf to beat this cat but next time you got to spit a lil betta 7/10

you was just pitiful wit your young flows you need a lil work but once your on this site for a lil mo you'll get betta5/10

may the best man win

i gotta give it to furoshis he was killin it not too many people can spit as well as he can

yo uppin this for votes................................. dont be scared to

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you furoshis you had nice puches,good multies,very good structure,and i think u had a personal i give u a 7/10

afterword you did good but u need to stretch your lines out more
nice punches,good structure, no personal,i give u a 6.5/10
thanks vote furoshis

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i just mit murk u next

can we get some un bias opinions
sactown love?
trey six love?

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"afterword disperses divert blirts to quench ya thirst"

bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1)

Help me close these/ and I will help U
an EYE 4 an EYE
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271

yo uppin this one needs some votes too.................................

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Aight Check Dis..

Furoshis: 6/10
Your Shit Was Alright, You Need Better Vocab To Your Shit and Your Multis Aren't Well Spoken...But You Did A Decent Job With The Flow..

Afterword: 4/10
Decent Opener...The Flow Was Kill..But You Feel Off..You Need to Open Your Mind and Be Creative....You Definitly Could've Had This Cat..

Vote-Furoshis

Good Battle To The Both OF You!

uppin for some honest votes.................

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yo cmon peep les vote somemoer on this 2 more votes to clos it

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Yo, i'm givin this to Afterword. It was close. Real close. Afterword, that was no where near your best, and I ain't even heard any of your other flows yet. Fact of the matter is that with flowin on the net you can't just explain to people that your flow would flow better in person, or that it's meant to be flowed in a certain way -- you just gotta put that shit down so sick that no one could even mistake the pace at which it is meant to be flowed or what words are meant to be emphasised. Have the fool on this site can rhyme, punch, dis, but can't illustrate any rhythm whatsoever. That's what hiphop's all about -- the words makin their own beat. Anyways, Afterword you definitely showed your ability to produce rhythm through your words and thats enough to take the vote over Furocious who didn't carry a rhythm quite as well.

UBR

yo unborn rookie iz droppin knowledge, the first real comment a nigga kan take sumtin frum. now thats wut im talkin about keepin it real, but at the same time tellin a nigga to step up da flow. gud shyt

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"afterword disperses divert blirts to quench ya thirst"

bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1)

Help me close these/ and I will help U
an EYE 4 an EYE
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271