Never will spit simplistic;clever wit instant visions/
measure the quickness; of sickness that I can hit in minutes/
whatever distance; you reaching man I've already hitten/
this style to sick but in your opinion; this is already bitten/
spitten to hot topics; clips-n-the glock cocked quick/
written wit top concepts; dont get hit wit these hot objects/
half of you drop non-sense; and flow like a clogged faucet/
then critize and say that its wack when I drop knowledge/
suffer the critical price; put niggaz through difficult times/
its pitiful guys; I stay more sharper then a kitchen of knifes/
dont even try ya shit wit me im sick and rebellious/
and more hard to understand then when Mystikals yellin...

Fuck everybody that beef with me before I left, niggaz who dont like me, and niggaz I dont like. That's just about everybody on this site.But I sohuld still be judged far in battles no matter how much you dont like me. Anywayz just lookin for some feedback. EVERYBODY STAND UP YA BOY IS BACK

Yo that's pretty dope! Like you go in depth on that! I like the flow and the attitude that matches that! Holla at ya boy!

thanks dawg....uppin for more feedback.....................................

Hotness. Im Vibin' To It. Check Out My Seven Verses In Open Mic And Tell Me What You Think. P.m. Me Back Or Somethin'. One.

.........supervillain The Tyrant

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R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love.

thanks dawg for the feedback

that some nice shit. you got some good vocab.
keep postin

Nice shit dog,
I'm really feelin you,
Keep dropin.

I live what I spit.
I spit what I live. Peace and props.

ok...not da best...u need to use multipus to get respect tho..some nice vocab...keep it up

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