eirbody in da club gettin tipsy......
drink time at da bar after da 2nd they gotta come and get me......
jus give me a toast if u wit me......

B.... here comes da A to K to da e....my pockets full of numbers...and my hoim boy got da trees.....my cousin drunk and he dancing wit eir grl dat he sees.....here goes da B to da O to da Y......i snuck in wit a fake ID i aient goin lie.....im tipsy my brother high 2 da sky.....here goes da R to da I to da P.....yea dat my crew im chillin wit lyrical mc...g duece some where wit a grl prolly in da b-e-d...vango had 2 leave,cuz he spilled hipnotic on his white tee.....some fake thugs ova greenttin on me....i called over adept he said he got my B-a-c...im shaking my head cuz its spinnin like bee.....knockin ova drinks i need 2 get some sleep......niggaz got so drunk we cant drive da jeep.....so we walked and we all ova da street.....when i get home then i kno i gotta sneak.....MC,ADEPT,and grim reap....all got home safe accept me.....when i went threw da window...my ma was staring at me...she said boy wats wrong i siad jus tipsy....

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I feel dat...listened to da beat and everything with it...I like it..


Keep Up The Dope Ish ..

Holla At your Boi Rated

~R~

ite cool

Isnt that similar to some song, dont remember its name....Bit of recycling it sounds. But it sounds better now etc, good work anyway.

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Tray-Six

dis was nice.....good vocab and metas...try to use some mulitups.....keep dropin'

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this was dope.
i like your creativity.
keep it up

much love from demolish

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