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Old 03-14-04, 01:06 PM   #1
da-one
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From: fayettenaum NC
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im taller than da two twin towers
fucc beanies 100 bar freestyle i'll rip for ten hours
dont get me started so dont crank da ingintion
alot of girlz like it ruff so im yankin extentions
my rhymin is viscious i rhyme and they listen
so much coke u think sellin baby powder
they knew i was gonna thug it out so they brung gunz to my baby shower
im siccer than aids one verse can fucc up ya life, what a problem
have you thinkin twice b4 u listen to my rapz with out a condm
my style is like a religion
somebody warn the muslims, jews, catholics, mormons, and christians
my shit so deep niggas sit down and meditate
da percent of my rapz is so high people cant even estimate
a unsinkable mothafucca like da titanic
catz scared of the heat cuz all my gunz iz gigantic
keepin these dudes in checcmate
so they keep they vest placed on they chestplate to protect they heart when da tecc spray
i eat catz up so much i start to call'em edible(Fit to be eaten as food)
they say dont even call me by my name juss call me incredible
my bulletz da size of cantillopes
u dudez iz poison to rap and i is da antidote
flowz so hot they turn on da sprinklers
cant even hold my rap sheetz they put a burn on ya finger
soon asi walk in they evacuate da buildin
gotsome many chiccscuz of me u go to masturbate for children
somebody give me a record deal i have to make a million

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Old 03-14-04, 07:15 PM   #2
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From: chicago 26 street
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it was good.
try to keep the lines the same length.
peace out.
its better than your last open mic
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