yo man les do this

10-15 lines
no d/r
no hate votes
5 votes win

verse due 15 mins after check in...............

(this is my check in so it seems ill be spittin first)

good luck

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yo you can't deny it im a rider like 2pac//
n my flows are poison like a spider when i fyer with 2 shots//
wit desire to live life by the wire i make otha crews drop//
n the way i inspire never gets tired cuz by everyone i get mad props//
you wanna fight so i just might rob niggaz like you who belong with white mobs//
but it aint quite right to yo head bobs//
cuz when i resite on the mic i enlight like Thomas Hobbs//
then with incite i ignite so just sit tight before i take flight//
im just bein polite, i dont spit what i write cuz thats too much of a rappers delight//
its good you accepted my invite but this loss will have you irritated like a bug bite//

jus a lil of da top.....butttttttttt. i think it will do.............

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yo man if you dont check in sometime tomorrow.......................you will be disqualified................

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sorry i came late but i was in other battles and forgot bout this one sorry, heres my flow CHECK IT

Tray six has betta chance survinin in a rainbow six video game/
cuz fuckin wit Devil's advos has bombs droppin on yall like rain/
nigga frontin as a crew member when you prolly not even listed/
just fucked up pictureperfect2 talkn bout puertorican dicks,and youll prolly be dairst ta kiss it (a puertorican dick)/
but enough with ma slaughters ill move to a different topic/
like how Prnelly always stay on top,Furoshis could never top it,cuz i take off like a rocket, fuck you up worse than a couple robo sockets/
cuz PRnelly never appear unranked/
droppin furoshis and his crew from the flank/
people know now which crew stay high and feared/
cuz Prnelly always drop enemies from the rear/

uppin for some vote.....................................

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Multis: puer, More consistancy actualy in the lines...
Flow: Furoshis, Simple almost herbish flow, but it was efective.
Vocab: Puer, it was playing off the structure but slightly better than furoshis
Structure:Puer, More consistent line length.

My vote. Puer


Please Vote on my current battles in sig please!

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I Voted Against Puertaricafag Cuz He A Bitch Who Is Scared To Battle Me

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NIGGAS DONT WANT IT WIT GUNFAM

Voting for puertoricanelly coz he used some good punch lines. I especially liked the first line. As for furoshis - you were o.k, but your lines were pretty basic and there werent no real punchlines in it. Sorry Man

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Razer Vs Dagreatest

Text Record:
Will A Peer Vs Razer (5-2)
Tha*Reign*Man Vs Razer (0-5)
Puertoricanelly Vs Razer (0-5)
guyver4mk Vs Razer (0-3): (Gave Up)
Da Greatest Vs Razer (0-5)

4 Wins, 3 Knockouts, 1 Loss.

Votes Conducted on:

Personals: Puertoricanelly
Punches: Puertoricanelly
Flow: Puertoricanelly
Multis: Furoshiz
Wordplay: Puertoricanelly
Lyrical Content: Puertoricanelly

easy to say Over all: Puertoricanelly

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nice battle good flows from the both of ya
furo: nice style good multies good structure good punches goos battle
putro: good style good flows good structure good punches but ima have to give this one to furo to me his was a bit better good battle from the both of you

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im sick like ya girl got that shit period

ok furoshis
flow 5/10
punches 6/10
enjoyment 5/10
16/30

Pur
flow 6/10
punches 7/10
enjoyment was 3/10(u lost my attention)
vote~Furoshis
That is how the cookie crumbles

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Multies-furoshis
Style-furoshis
Flow-furoshis
Punches-pr

aihjt gonna have to give this one to fur. his wasnt to good.......but niether was purtiricanally.

fur: you was alrite i can see that your style is nuffin but multies and alil meta4s.....oyu had coo punches...actually one of you betta battles even tho it wasnt that good.........all in all 6/10

purt: you was cooo...i expected mo from you... but you also need to work on your punches and do alil multies and com wit harder punches,.... but i just expected mo from you.......you also lacked struture.....you also took long to post.....all in all5/10

vote=fur.

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my MYSPACE is Better than Yours

i gotta give it to furoshis, hi killed, puertorican, you should me ashamed