This is somethin else I've been workin on........it's a bit rusty


Yo........
Defyin laws of gravity, they're grabbin me/
Havin the capacity to crush my chest cavity/
So, exstatically I shout spittin blood out my spout/
I ain't ever goin that route, I doubt I'm ever goin out/
And with no doubt about it, My boys they crowd around it/
Found me on the ground my boys they down to catch a poundin/
Dumbfounded by the hits and kicks they caught for me/
They strive to stay alive so they can tell the crew the story/
A forty gets tipped, sippin hennessey for my memories/
Penalties gettin paid, the rim Reaper is gettin sent for me/
Mentaly I'm alive, Physically I'm in a coffin/
Killin force with no remorse slayin guilty bitches often/
Off the charts, the dark starts to become light/
I'm not very far but it's hard to catch me in your sights/
I might just bite, strike with the force of a cobra/
I thought I told ya, But still my blood is gettin colda/
The road to hell is hot, the cold blooded are still on top/
I got my shit locked, cocked, so you know I'm ready to rock/
What the fuck? Am I outta my fuckin mind?/
Or is my body the thing I cannot fuckin find/
I'm not Sublime but I'll drink a 40oz to freedom/
Demons? I see them, Hungry for knowledge so I feed 'em/

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YO I thought all the bars were hot I think you nice!

Thanks..........I appreciate the compliment

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Hit me up wit some feed back and let me know what ya think

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1st two lines and the last line were the illest, decent drop....props

This is some shit I dropped about four or five years ago but never shared it wit anyone. You can probably tell by the old outdated slang and concepts I used

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this is some dope shit. very nice flow.
i like your lines.
put some more punchlines and it will be even iller.
check some of my shit out on open mic


lataz ya boy from crhyme sindicate!!