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Old 03-20-04, 10:04 PM   #1
T.O.
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From: Dayton
1st freestyle, feedback

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cant no one fuck wit me,
cuz i gotta make it to heaven,
get outta this scene,
cuz im goin through hell,
in this war white versus black,
and even tho im white,
i got my black brothas back,
this lil prejudice bitch wanna fight me again,
after i kicked his ass for jumpin one a my friends,
beat em so bad i gotta go ta court,
gettin charges pressed against me for breakin his wrist and shit,
since when is it right for ppl who help ta get this shit,
aint enuff ppl in this world helpin shit,
so why should the few go thru this,
im temporarily def for my black friends,
tryin ta repay the debts for my ancestors mistakes,
now its my turn to get punished,
in my own free will i did this,
i still think its worth it,
all that blood i lost out my head and out my face,
just cuz a my stupid race,
in this war between us couple thousands of ppl,
ppls been shot,
bones been broke,
who knows,
when this wars gonna go,
i came in this world humble,
now i dont give a fuck no mo,
i was treated wrong by my family and my race,
african americans took me in,
accepted me,
got my back,
became my friends,
now i got there back,
and these white racist bitches im hittin on,
they bout to be shitted on,
they did us wrong,
actin hard,
they bout to get blasted,
them bastads (bastards) bout ta be shipped in caskets,
we dont play dat,
so if u play around,
u bout ta meet my gat,
brains go splat,
bye u fuckin white trash,
u jus got smoked like my stash


i kno its not all that good at all i kno, but im supposed ta fight again this week, and i figured id get some off my chest so i dont kill this bitch, peace
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Old 03-21-04, 03:21 AM   #2
Gambino
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umm i dont know it didnt really rhyme

but your probably more of an audio head
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Old 03-21-04, 03:33 AM   #3
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o thought it was wack even 4 ur 1st time u need to work on like everything
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Old 03-21-04, 04:04 AM   #4
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i liked tha message bro...be safe ya heard...fuck tha racist biatches out thurr...lol
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Old 03-24-04, 03:10 PM   #5
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thats right fuck them racists bitches out there
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