Aight Here Is Da Battle..

Rules:
10-20 Lines (10 Bar Max!)
5 Votez Winz
3-0 is KILL
No Crew, Hatin, or D/R Votes
Spits Due After Both Check Ins

.::Checkity Check::.

~R~

Checking in.


Might as well spit straight off im not sure of US timezones but yeah spit when you see this.


Aiiiii (ali g) lets drop this shit.


Im ready to run this shit through you/
I aint fly Im a spider/
Murk and terrorise you faggots like Al-Qaeda/
Now your sitting there, pissing your underwear/
But I aint finished with ya dont despair/
What you wear? Red blue?
Dont matter cause im gonna make these lyrics rip through you/
Youll have to find a new crew/
What happened to you/
What happened to ya crew ILL/
You were never rill (real) you just got off your pill/
Imma eat you up boy, like it was my last meal/
But now its time for me to reveal my lyrical skill/

Im like a reverin, smacking down you and your brethren/
My words are like a boomerang scripture, come back around and hit cha/
Now your stressin, hiding from my crew like we carryin smith n wessen's/
Thats my cause to teach you punks a lesson/
If I dont attack ya, consider it a blessin/

Right now you sitting there, stunned by shock/
You tryna think of comebacks, I'll just continue to mock/
Its like pearl harbour, im the Japanese and your my dock/


Reply ASAP, lets finish this shit.

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Impendance, Lyrical defendance.

I NEED ME SOME CRACK -Tyrone Biggums.



Tray-Six

LoL Rip Dis Kid.....Rip Dis Kid...

Aiyo Just Got Back From Shopping With My Gurls From Sadies...Checkity Check...

Aiyo...Representing Undestructable Emcees..Checkity Check..

3.......2......1....Check It

Ya Your Im-Pen-Dense, Cause You Write and Spit Like Shit Wit Your Herb In-Sense-Es,
Taking This *Liberty* To Burn Ya *Constitution* and Throw Away Your *In-De-Pen-Dence*/
Fucking Biter, Ya DickRyder, Snyper and TOon Have The Same IP..I Wonder Why?
Your Whole Crew Are Fakes, Bitches, and Dickryders, You All Cheaters In Disguise/

Spitting With Percise Percision, Picked Apart Your Verse and Diminished Ya Lyrics
Lyrical Spirits, They All Saying I'ma Win, U Def? Can't You Hear It?/
Burn Ya Pad and Break Ya Pen, Shoulda Forefitted This Battle, Cause You Bout To Lose Again,
Comparing You To Myself, Is Like Smoking Weed and Then Smoking Seeds and Stems/

I'll *Juss Blaze* You, My Verse Is On Fire, *Snyper* Dis Bitch From Da Empire,
*TOon*-N Dis Fool, *Liqour Of Tears* When You Lose, Ya Crew's Going Up For Hire/
This Must Be March Madness The Way I'm Break'N Ankles and Ballin This Bitch Around Court,
You Keep Shooting, Should Call You *Gary Coleman* The Way You Coming Up Short/

Do I Even Have To Mention That You Have No Wins and You Lost A Herb Battle?
Weight Of Dis Battle? I Have The Weight Of The World and I Still Make Galaxies Rattle/
Cold-Hearted, I'ma Suck Out Your Soul, Till You Have Nerve-Disease Like Christopher Reeves,
Coming At Me, My Undescribed Ill-Flow, Hittin Wit Fatal Blows, Till You Bowing On Ya Knees/

Your Metaphors Criss-Cross Like Drag Queens, Dick Is The Only Thing You Be Spitting On,
Your Punches Soft, Hitting Like ButterBean,
Hermathodytes, Only Thing You Be Hitting On/
Like Hydrogen Bonds, To Acidic Molecules, I'm Burning Ya Brain Cells Till They Un-Exist,
Who Can Mess With This? Like Blind-Men Having Sex, You Don't Know Who Your Fucking With/

~R~

Haha...Man I Thought You Would Be More of A Challenge...Tired Of These Wack Emcees Haha...

Yea...Uppin Dis Bizatch!

impendence: your structure was simple, and punchlines well if i seen any were not hittin as hard , vocabulary needs a little bit more strength to compete

restricted: structure was okay...jus a little too stretched out, vocab was great, punchlines hitting

so overall i vote restricted. impendence got mercked on this one
oh yeah please return the favor to my battle click the link below

<a href="http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116933">guvyer4mk vs da classic</a>
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116933

I gots to agree wit Chalk, it was way to simple on Impendence's part. Restricted took this, fa sho....
v: Restricted

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breakdown for restricted:

flow:slick rhyming solid rhyme structure that you stay with from start to finish without hurting you amount of punches keep up the work 9/10

volcab:the first couple of bars were strong but threw out the rest you started to weaken still stronger then your oppenent 7/10

punches:my fav even though kinda played, "Cold-Hearted, I'ma Suck Out Your Soul, Till You Have Nerve-Disease Like Christopher Reeves," you had some other good ones to like that weed one overall good job 7/10

overall:23/30 overall from start to end this is great keep up the work

breakdown for impendance:

flow:basic but good i don't know i guess you should improve here i give 6/10

volcab:really nothing special you could really use uppin this 6/10

punches:best line,"Its like pearl harbour, im the Japanese and your my dock/" weak but it was your best up this big time if you want to win battles against anyone but maybe weak newbies 5/10

overall:17/30 would of been an alright openmic but aside from that weak

vote-- restricted better punches

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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

Impadent why you call out guys you cant take man strict rip you to pieces man his flow punch structur metas multis and god damn everything was better

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