i wrote this yesterday.....tell me wut yall think

yea im back, still flowing neva nervous
spitting it straight, words hotter than a furnace
its been a while, time for this prophet to resurface
waiting anxiously like a coke fiend's next purchase
Ur boi B is back, fuck u generic emcees
i can freestyle in 2 languages and murder yall with ease
cause this yungbuck done graduated to a lyrical Hercules
Storming the gates like cerberus straight outta fuckin hell
rhymes entracing, mysterious like Circe's spell
screamin lyrics louder than commentary from Dick Vitale

my life is still filled with stress, i just learned to cope
ive seen more scandals in my family than the clergy n pope
got a lil pup for a while but my best friend is still dope
getting higher than a circus freak walkin some tight rope
family issues got me fucked up but there is still some fuckin hope
cause i kno in the end sis, youll forget that jerk and not elope
i couldnt stand having my name written on ur suicide note
but its all good now, ive washed my hands with soap
i aint giving no more advice....my life aint perfect NOPE

still gettin drunk, blazing green and smokin sqaures
sammy gone now and shes the only only that cares
played the cards wrong, shoulda known to stick with pairs
we was perfect together like ditka and the bears
but it wasnt gonna work,a drumroll with no snares

a playa never slips, loses balance, or stumble
i mite lose a couple of snaps but i aint neva gonna fumble
so Bashar's plan is to hit bitches till they crumble
fuck them so hard i rearrange their organs like a jumble
give me the freakest girls and watch this arab rumble

still reppin the napp, but neva lost sight of back home
for Jordan id take a bullet straight to the fuckin dome
no matta where my life takes me i aint neva gonna raom
an arab for life, youll neva hear me say shaloam
i have yall scared now like u seen that ghost kasper
shit, ill pray for ur souls but i aint no fuckin pastor
Can call u Bash, B, or just holla rhyme master
my lyrics aint just getting improving, they also getting vaster
u turles betta step up cause this rabbit is getting faster

yall looking at me now, eyes fillin up with awe
damn it only takes this cat 20 sec to take off a bra
give me 5 min and ill have my dick in ur bitches jaw
then ill hit that shit Bashar style, straight fuckin raw
i guess i won this battle, i got the bigger straw


please any feedback is appreciated

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hot freesyle dog......

shit had good rhyme scheme good vocab and good flow.......

one love.......