ayo ima burry u six feet down
at ur funeriral ill spit on the ground
cuz i done told you i wasnt foolin around
now ya niggaz afta but there just gonna see that im the king n thats reality maybe the next guy that thinks he is mr. slick
will back down when i show him my click
see when i had my nine to ur face n u said i wouldnt
so i pilled the trigga n it was a discrace
in a second the cops were surounding the place
but i disapeared in the night without a single trace
the next bitch that wants to mess ill put a bullet in his chest like the rest
i dont tolerate ur stupididy
so i shoot u with humility
cuz ur dumb to think u could kill me
i kno it needs more work but i came up wit it in study hall and i didnt get it done

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thought it was basic rhymes need to work on vocab and multeis....


one love.....

Yea Boi Work On it A Bit!! Vocab Is a Bit Basic and You Need More WordPlay

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hey i under stand all this word play but all this vocab crap..im a boy that likes to freestyle im not an english teacher

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it'z good but it'z called six feet under not down you mother f*cker!

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so what chicks can rap too/
u won't battle me cause i can beat u/

Don't Critisize On SomeOnes Rhyme Especially' If You Don't Know What They Meant By It' Meaning... ' ' ' Under - Down? They Could Have Changed It ... Understand'

(No Disrespect)

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