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View Poll Results: Who is NOT to be merk'd?
Red Dogg420 0 0%
Limited Edition 5 100.00%
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Old 03-26-04, 10:52 PM   #1
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A'ight...house rulz, due in an hour after check in...

5 bars (10 Lines)...

A'ight, lets do this shizat.
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Old 03-26-04, 11:02 PM   #2
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im gonna crash tha club, break tha law, throw sum chairs, crack ur jaw, if its killin season then aint no reason aint no need to stall.......
im tha one put here to absorbe all this energy and pain........
non stop pop from tha top of the clip and ya glock i still dont feel ya main,
cause of dat, crown and coke, an hour a fuckin a pound of dro,
im must confess i aint bout shyt, but if u think to cross me bych,
ull end up stankin walk tha plank an empty out yo pockets bych,
break tha law, break yo leg, crash the club and crack yo neck,
with these issues that im facin dayly i shood tote a tech, get respect thas no option, all tha hatas feel retoxin, walk right the crowd and pistols get to flossin


read that shyt kinda fast so it makes sense
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Old 03-27-04, 12:07 AM   #3
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Yo...check it...

Red, you couldn't be thug, if yoor name included 'G'
Your bark don' have bite...your a faggot from tha chi

You have 26 posts, and you are already challening experience
Dawg, are you serious? Wit a wack verse, you must be delerious

Yeah, we all like to smoke weed, have sex, and thug it
You ain' gangsta, jus' a faggot playin' on a trumpet

Claimin' 4:20 in ya name, but you have never smoked mary jane
I can tell you ain' gangsta, your fake thug posts you can't maintain

I only needed a halfed-ass verse, to finish this joke
You couldn't beat me if you had my talent...

...And all of my past votes...
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Old 03-27-04, 12:11 AM   #4
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umm, this is not because i hate 420 (which i do, believe me) but limited gets this, he may not have had a great verse, but at least he disses 420, that faggot just talks about himself, i think he said the word "i" more than anything else, all their is to it, punches and personals need to be their and 420 had 0.
 
Old 03-27-04, 12:17 AM   #5
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Only needed a half-assed verse to beat him anyway...no offense Red, but Proof is right, dawg...

Uppin' 1. Leave a link, and I will hit it up.
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Old 03-27-04, 12:25 AM   #6
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yeah, i love when i get people makin fun of my 1-11 record, but do you really think that with my two versus i would have that bad a record unless i got dq'ed, i think from 10 of them, id be like 7-2 if i would not have had around 11 open battles at once
 
Old 03-28-04, 02:56 PM   #7
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Slept on...leave a link, I'll hit it up...

Uppin' 2.
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Old 03-30-04, 12:54 PM   #8
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Uppin' 3. Bein' slept on, come on................

Leave a link, an' I will hit it up.
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Old 03-30-04, 01:26 PM   #9
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props to both battlers, to begin with.

Red dogg, as i can see you are an amateur, not only as a ''Net-cee'' but as a lyricist, so you have work to do. First of all you didn't establish a direct diss to your opponent. So as always that's points off. A battle is just that. a battle. You have to battle HIM. However you did have a decent flow and rhyme structure. You might wanna put these---->// at the end of each line so we know where you're rhyming.

Limited, i can see that you did a minimal effort because you knew it wouldn't take much to beat him. I've done the same thing several times. You're format is usually used by people with ridiculously ill lines. so i was a bit thrown off when it was a mediocre verse. But it was enough to beat him simply because you dissed him directly.

So Limited gets my vote

check this battle out, vote.

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Old 03-30-04, 01:08 PM   #10
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This Battle Was Completely One-Sided.The Only Thing Red Had Goin For Him Was A Tad Bit Of Flow.The Rest Of This Verse Barely Made Any Sense And The Part That Did Seem Sensible Was Repeated Over And Over.Limited Takes This One.His Punches Was All He Needed To Win This One.Even If He Did Half-Ass It.

Vote-Limited Edition
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Old 03-31-04, 12:16 AM   #11
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Tell white boy won, and it was white boyish

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I only needed a halfed-ass verse, to finish this joke
You couldn't beat me if you had my talent...

...And all of my past votes...

red, quit tryin'a b Twista:
read that shyt kinda fast so it makes sense

and that's all

vote:Limited

hit theses, or a few up,
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117712
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117241
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117228
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=104596
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117337


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Old 03-31-04, 01:13 AM   #12
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red dogg, good flow, but like what everyone else been sayin that shit didnt have any punches, and was pretty dumb, if u was luda or sumbody i mighta let u get away wit it
limited addition: no flow, dumb ass punches, but u actually attempted punches, if the other guy had one punch i'da gave it to him but........
vote: limited

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Old 03-31-04, 07:00 PM   #13
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A'ight thx dawgz, I'm gonna hit up those links...let's finish this off...

Uppin' 4.
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Old 04-01-04, 10:59 AM   #14
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Yo, lets finish this shit up...

Uppin' Final.
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Old 04-02-04, 11:14 AM   #15
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Yo, this was definately one-sided. Sorry Red, but this nigga limited didn't even hafta spit after i saw your first two lines man. The flow was fucked from the start, and he just dogged you in every category, that's how it's goin' down.

That was an honest vote, just tryin' to tell y'all what you did good and bad and all that, so go vote on mine and do the same, honestly
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