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Old 03-28-04, 08:20 PM   #1
LA4Lyfe
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Da Lady Raped Me

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wat can i say the lady fucked wit my mind, i lost my cherry
flicked it outa da port, while most die i survived barely
though my lungs enflamed i complained not one minute
tried 2 numb da pain, i stayed strong wit such comitment
dident know infact dat dis hell was only the beggining
of da struggle we are all burdoned wit just for living
as individuals it is pivital for our children 2 know da truth
so as i am witness 2 da wrong i shall expose it as proof
dis is ur future

niggaz die in places were light is 2 afraid 2 shine
blood flows like wine in a land unoticed 2 all but crime
rhymes hide da hurt behind thin lines of dollar signs
and kind only seems 2 find time 2 murder itz own kind
and why? ill tell you infact its dat simple 2 understand
tactics are planed 2 make sure da house has da upperhand
da liberty we trust, will bust us 2 da dome at first chance
da lady dat we love, will rape us all here were we stand
da women who on her shoulder built dis land of da brave
cares 4 no man who slavez 2 make minumum wage
so take it 4rm LA, keep ur mind set on breakin free
how do i know libertys corupt, cause da lady raped me
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Old 03-29-04, 06:30 AM   #2
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that was hot......


liked topic..........

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Old 03-29-04, 12:28 PM   #3
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[color=red]shit was hot...nice imagery and flow.....good topic.....vocab was nice and you added some complexity to it and made it nice to read......7/10mics homie nice drop[/color
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