Twist ya head of like snapple top/
Watch ya body drop, that’s the price of being on top
I told you I was coming, glock out cause im gunning, no time for
Stunning, just leave a nigga’s blood running/
I go too deep to sleep, leave your body weak from my verbal blows, spit on you so much you’ll have to go and change clothes, holding it down for all the pros, switching up my flows caus this is road I choose./
Imposing threats to any MC I ever met, lyrically taking you to speeds that are equilateral to the fastest jet, I do this with no sweat, ball out of the stadium when im up to bat, and I keep my pockets fat, ready to react with my pro-action before your actions hit me, open your eves and you see that
I go deeper than any math equation, invading on any situation, making moves to spots that aren’t suffering from inflation/ lower prices so I can buy my herbs and spices/ making many moves to pay dues but never dropping clues.

ok flow but dont use the same word to make shit rhyme thats wack
and dont talk about gunnin ppl down it just makes u sound wack
and try to improve ur vocab a lil keep droppin pretty good 4 ur first drop

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u strizz

It Waz Good But It Sounded Like A Battle! What'z Up Wit That!

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so what chicks can rap too/
u won't battle me cause i can beat u/

thanks for the imput

it was pretty good except for that line that rhymed with same word..........


one love........

^^^^i agree wit tha same line thing
um work on ur structure it wuz a lil confusing
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