10/20 lines ma
no verse flippin feedin etc/ blind spit
check in and then 1 hour to spit time begins

Animal

Im an evil thing from beneath the earth//
I spread like wild fire like Ive been cursed//
Ive been cast out by the devil //
I eat to much red meat//
Am gonna threaten ya fire//
with every girls desire//
am gonna giveum ya phone number so you expire//
In the heat of the firey sun//
am gonna snap ever finger even ya thumb//
while i get out a glook and skweas the triger//
and blow a piece of ya liver//


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aniaml

Animal thinks he can jus go out and bust G's//
When he doesnt even no how to SHELL PEAS//
Your writin style is so god damned ridiculous//
ive herd your lines before...now ain that conspicuous!//

Its unbelievable how u were ever seen as concievable//
a baby born like u in many countries wud be so illegal//
u try to bust slugs n act like a wannabe exzibit//
before we even started you had a 5-0 defosit!//
If you want, I'll teach you to say things as perfectly as ive sed//
'n' if you wanna lose agen then just open a new battle thread//

Peace bro u no i gotcha back really...

A-Cubed

plz hit this up ppl n dont let it get slept on!
my record needs a hell of a lot of improvement and i need to elevate!

Peace Y'all...

A-Cubed

come on y'all can ya plzhit this up n i'll return da favour honestly!
jus leave the link or summat n i'll hit it up!

Peace y'all!

A-Cubed

ppppppppppppplllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll llllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...................... ......
hit this up n i'll return a favour...it dont matta if this battle is weak jus plz vote,

Peace...

A-Cubed

A-cubed took this...better structure nicer punchlines...dont think animal really wanted 2 battle...he just must have been reeeeeeal bored....im sure he's better than that....

anyways both YALL hit this battle up
threatz vs quickpunch

eazy vote/a-cubed animal didnt even have nothin to come with ac had better punchz personalz an structure waznt even a close battle

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

Animals my homie n all but we like to ave a gud cupleof battles very now and then...hes dope verbally but hes dyslexic n dats summat u dont hear everyday LOL

Peace...

A-Cubed

yo a cubed seat up another thread

speak to you later

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animal

cubed served this other cat
animal need to get more active and add some damn spunk to his flow
that shit was dry as power stick(deoderant)
"I eat to much red meat//
Am gonna threaten ya fire//
with every girls desire//
am gonna giveum ya phone number so you expire//"
-start by steppin up ya vocab, and lenghthen yur lines out

cube u had a descent effort, but still room 4 improvement
gud closer:
If you want, I'll teach you to say things as perfectly as ive sed//
'n' if you wanna lose agen then just open a new battle thread//

call it how i c it
peace
return da favor

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uppin bro's lets not let this get slept on!

Peace....

A-Cubed

yep.. this battle was defintely cube's. his closer alone pretty much beat animal's verse... "i eat too much red meat" ??? i mean come on, that wont win a battle. that's worse than filler...

"get out a glook" .. i mean come on man its not "ghetto" to have typos and whack disses everywhere.. elevate.

hit up the battles in my sig..

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This Battle Was A Little On The Weak Side.Im Goin With A-Cubed Tho.His Verse Had Mostly Disses & All Were Better Than Animal's.Neither Of The Two Had Any Punches,Or Atleast Any Worth Mentioning.Animal Had A Bunch Of Weak Lines & Just Talked In His Verse.A-Cubed Also Had The Flow Working Towards His Favor.Both Emcees Need To Elevate

Vote-A-Cubed

Return The Favor:
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...87&page=1&pp=15

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ANIMAL-
ive decided this time ima tell you what wrong wit ya battle

THIS!!!!!!!!!!!
"Im an evil thing from beneath the earth//
I spread like wild fire like Ive been cursed//
Ive been cast out by the devil //
I eat to much red meat//
Am gonna threaten ya fire//
with every girls desire//
am gonna giveum ya phone number so you expire//
In the heat of the firey sun//
am gonna snap ever finger even ya thumb//
while i get out a glook and skweas the triger//
and blow a piece of ya liver//"

1. try to actually throw punches at him
you said alot of things, you got the flow going, but u should try make it personal(you must include him)
2. you basically just wrote a pretty poem, this is a battle and
kid he destroyed you,
3. their is somewhere on this site a place where you can get help if your struggling
you should read it, i think its on the Emcee Introduction page(dont qoute me)
cuz im not sure,(something about punches....)

for your verse i give you 1/10 for flow

a cubed- nice the whole thing had nice flow, punches, alot was funny
easy to read,
this was good though a bit boring, could pick up a bit on meti's and wordplay
"Animal thinks he can jus go out and bust G's//
When he doesnt even no how to SHELL PEAS//
Your writin style is so god damned ridiculous//
ive herd your lines before...now ain that conspicuous!"

but honestly that was fu**ing good(maybe its just his verse that makes urs looks so damn good)
here is ya score------7/10

vote A-Cubed