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Old 03-31-04, 11:15 PM   #1
unseenMC
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another long one, let me kno

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this is so my mind can rest/
insomniac with a demon that keeps givin me the test,
defeatin all the rest while still thinkin bout homiez that didnt last,
runnin away from the things i did and how much i had to blast!
why cant i forget my past???,
the dirt wen i had to dash,
my dreams are seasond with shit that makes others stand aghast,
but you wont last,
im here for the time so take my raps and shine
like the beautiful mind that goes deeper than any-aged-wine,
but like the prophet of earth,
thru all the educated birth,
ur dead at the end of this battle, body in a herse .
ill leave u full of clips like hte moon blockin the sun,
metaphors dirty like herpes but harder to catch,
it will take every nitch of ur metaphysisist,
countin the marks on ur face i left with my murderous fist,
i broke the thermometer and hand fed u the mercury,
cryin that shit is poisen but no one is there to here you screem,
learn to speak and behave or get locked up as a government slave,
redefining revolution speakin to the masses,
raps carry the sound and message of atomic blassses.
and if you go platinum it has everythin to do with luck, be happy that a million motherfuckers are stupid as fuck.
My message has been seen and soiled with a masterpeice screen,
fortold in the philosophy books that im the killer of every soul,
technique wipped to a fine razor,
chemically imbalanced to the point where mc's ar havin a seizure,
so before u start to battle actually listen to my words as they gatter,
hit u in the back ur spewin blood
and your raps are on my platter.
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Old 04-01-04, 12:09 AM   #2
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I liked the vocab but the rhymes were kinda basic........

but i liked it..........

one love..........
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