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Old 04-02-04, 10:42 PM   #1
Triple_N
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Lightbulb The Depths Of The Darkness That Surrounds Me

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The darkness envokes me with many fears and worries
The lonliness that engulfs me, enables me to tell..
these stories
This is suppose to be a poem, but its morelike...
emotional exploration
The darkness that surrounds me causes nerveness and..
perspiration
Making it even harder to find my final destination
Is this a panic attack, is it severe depression
I ask myself these questions looking into a...
mirror with a weird facial expression
I wonder am I mentally ill, taughted by the fact...
I'm at the mercy of my own will
I'm trying to find happiness for myself
I surely don't find comfort from people saying the...
notorious line "at least you got your health"
I'm just a young man trying to find his place in life
Until I do, I'll still be in the darkness, searching...
for the light
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Old 04-03-04, 05:52 PM   #2
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Pretty nice. Good mind exploration type of poem. Check my poems, ill havem in my sig in a sec.
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