once again no crew votez



accomplishment yo life must only be worth 50 cent/
and just like past due rent itz about to get spent/
your flowz all look the same like paragraphz with no indent/
claimin u got classics but only thing in yo pocket iz lint/

so get the picture an inbed this in yo memory/
ill shoot a line down yo face an call it a line of semmetry/


you can ask any nigga about me an bet they tell u im a beast/
this aint no beef but like big and pac u can easily be deceased/
laid there in ya 6 by 9 wit makeup an clothez freshly creased/
knowin beneath all that you more holy then a priest/

checkin whens my verse due...............................

__________________

u said u waz ready my shit waz blind spit so letz ride

mine too dawg lemme key this up be like five minutes i said i was ready for you to set it up i gotta key somthin quick

__________________

spit that shit show these boiz how to rhyme

aight check it REPPIN CLAS SIC

youve been delivered, "handle with care" accomplishment droppin shit wit incredible flare...
printcha verse construct a paper plain for da air, throw it off ya roof say ya rhymes went somewhere.../

Clas sic, accomplishment da excorist dismessin ya ghostly spit...
my rhymes mise well be "gospels" got this board goin "HOLY" Shit../

putcha inna light hold, ya moms told me ya spit ya verse into ya "freezer", claimin its "ice-cold".../
but my crew still leaveya wit more "dots" then "Dice"-rolled.../

yo life is irelevant, i slayed ya, you killed like "elders", by "youth in asia"...
ya outa place, fuck! i broke my backspace, still watchme "erase-ya".../

i'm a one man entinty, surrond yo verse like a set of fuckin parenthisis...
quit fussin reactin to my repurcussion, is like you tryin to walk without stability.../

dat shit is ill....by the way FUCK KUNIVA PUSSY BITCH

__________________

damn posted that in 2 minutez wit quotez an everythang wha u type 100 wordz aminute?

UPPIN DONT SLEEP

nah it took like 8 minutes aight upppin this shit

__________________

u suck man i will wip ur ass any day in a rap battle bitch

ight heres my thing

punches-accomplishment
structure-both
flow-accomplishment
multies-some what both more like accomplishment

it seemed like yall were havin fun with it so it doesnt matter who takes this

ghost u just need 2 up ur vocab and multies and i gurantee u'll be 1 of the best in here

vote-accomplishment

OH YEA FUCK KUNIVA...MOTHA FUCKA BITCHIN CAUSE I SAID A-1 LYRICIST SPIT LIKE THEY DONT EXIST...YEA READ MY SIG AND U'LL KNO WHAT IM ABOUT....PUSSY

haha still uppin this yo ...............yo gotta explain them mofuckas too

__________________

Aight still upppin for votes

__________________

That first bar from accomplishment pretty much sealed the deal, "just so you could say your rhymes go somewhere" - awesome punch. I also think acc had the better flow here just because he managed to pull off the longer lines which has more difficulty to it, nice multiple rhymes helping that. acc also had the really nice world play.. all in all basically wins.

return the favor, vote on my battles:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118568
http://community.rapbattles.com/forumdisplay.php?f=6

scratch that second link, the right one is at:

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118554

yo thanx for da votes uuuuuuuppppppppinn

__________________