im not sure whether i spelled it right but oh well.
i am new to spitn and shit, and new to rb, id appreciate critisisms cuz its one of my first attempts.
ps: i was fuckin lean when i wrote this. so some may not make any sense.

Rebel or angelic, dont fuck with me , i aint sympathetic//
overdosed anasthetic, but not quite as pathetic, to think merrik was a faggot//
no i dont want to start another riot//
my mom would kill me if i tore this shirt i hired//
i dont wanna stop this sptin, but im too lean and tired//
even my girl thinks im wired to the bedpost//
she ignores me like a dead ghost//
she boasts her cain roles like kurt on cocaine//
if ya'll wondrin who kurt is, his last names cobain//
at least the wife he was with was noble//
my fuckin girl thinks im expendible//
speakin of noble which she aint//
i put up with so much shit i should be a saint//
fuck the jail bait, she aint great, only a grated face with cum marks from razorblades//
il regenerate to the state and let fate fuck the hate within me//
i aint the sinner she does it for me//
of course i could see when i pee//
the guy next to me in the lavatry says to me '' man, you alright?''
no nigga my piss is white//
white as snow but dont get the wrong idea ho//
i'm just 'snoop dogg' with a boobjob tryin to get doe//

well. at least some of it did rhym.lol

you just snoop dogg with a boob job? what is up with you and ya girl??? whoa
i think that you got alittle something with ya.. maybe we could battle... holla