like i said, 10-20 lines with maybe a couple extra, you spit first, dont take forever, good luck.

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yo i tell u this is that nigga city,
i'ma tell u ya flows are shity,
i'ma tell u ya girl would look pretty,
but only if she didn't look like p diddy,
but nah on some real shit,
i'm that nigga u can't fuck wit,
not just cuz i roll wit da branch click,
because i'll squezze u girls titand fuck that bitch,
i'm that nigga that put ya life in danger,
and got runnin to da local ranger,
sayin city on da losse and he tearin down the roof,
help me help me wut should i do,
let me tell you,
run away and don't turn back,
cuz you'll see dis gat,
and these bullet,simin ya mullet,
this is my first battle and i'm take it from new york to seattle,
to the countree wit the bull and cattle oh and ya girl roc my sattle,
fuckit i'm done

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u think this is a game?

I'M ON MY OWN RIGHT NOW I'M LOOKIN 4 A CREW

Aye Yo' .. Shadow Going To Merk You Playa' I Seen Some Of His Shit' And He Is Heated' ..... If He Brings It!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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This match stacked like lion n wolf pup
Dropping bombs all over ya city, so look up
Why you trying to represent new york?
bitch you couldn’t beat me if your rhymes was corked
N’ while you dribble drivel with pen and paper
I scribble riddle all over skyscraper
Takes me 5 minutes to carve a masterpiece
Take your ass 5 lifetimes at least
You call me gay 8 different way
But I run circles around you with lyrical wordplay
Too fast so you rasping, gasping for breath
Doubled over and half wishing for death
Seeing red n almost dead, so you pull the trigger
Nothing happens, I would have figured
Cuz when the label on your uzi reads “toys-r-us”
And the inscription on your ass reads “boys-r-us”
And when your tighty-whiteys got pics of mighty mouse
Seems like you paid a visit to Jackson’s play house

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lol thanks DP.. don't need no d/r votes even though i know you don't.. always voting against me

vote on this shit people, dont sleep on it

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I Might Always Vote Against You But In This Case (Battle) I Dont Have To! (LoL)

I Mean You Can Tell City Just Starting To Take Up Key'Style'N Becuase He ReallyNeeds To Evelate' .. NO Doubt His Shit Was Basic.. I Mean Peep These Lines

yo i tell u this is that nigga city,
i'ma tell u ya flows are shity,
i'ma tell u ya girl would look pretty,
but only if she didn't look like p diddy,
but nah on some real shit,
i'm that nigga u can't fuck wit,

^Lol' .. Quit With The "Buts" .. Maybe If You Was Writeing A Story Or Sum Shit' But It Aint Working For You, You Aint Going To Get No Props On That Shit

And Shadows W'Sup With That... Verse You Spit' I Mean I Know You Can Do "ALOT Better Then That" I Know Because You Went Up Against Me And You Came.. With Skills... and Heated Punches.. But You Lacking ...

Cuz when the label on your uzi reads “toys-r-us”
And the inscription on your ass reads “boys-r-us”

^ Them Lines Was Funny

Shadows Your Punches Were Alright Better Then Any Of.. City's Though.. You Just Need To Know How To Get Them Connected.. When They Hit'

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shadow won thats my new boy he a pimp city you should leave rap battles and never look back your done you got owned. bbiiiaaattcch

stfu with your nub votes, i aint your boy just fuck off unless you actually have something to say

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^^ uppin ... let this shit actually count... vote

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This Battle Was One Sided.Shadow Took This One With Better Punches & Disses.His Opener Was A Little Bit Weak But The Ending Was Nice.City Didnt Have Much Of A Chance.His Lines Were Too Basic & Played

Elevate.

Vote-Shadow Edge

Could Ya'll Return The Favor & Vote On This:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117642

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yo i'll return the favor when you actually drop a vote in the poll..

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My Bad Kid
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I Forgot
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its all good... yo upin for more votes... gimme a KO baby

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breakdown....
Opener - shadows...droppin bombs wus pretty nice compared to city's...
Flow - city...ya flow was nice....shadow werk on ya flow...
Punches - shadows...ya actually threw punches...city u were jus talkin while rhyming...elevate...
Personals - shadows...both need werk on personals but shadows did have a couple decent personals...
Closer - shadows...was a weak punch but iwas betta than wut city wrote...
v/shadows for an overall more devloped verse
city u need to elevate...shadows u need elevation but good job u have potential.....
return the favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118637

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

Yo, it takes little to no common sense to see that Shadow one this shit. City...you need to elevate a lot. Structure, punches, vocab, everythin' was just so elementary...go look at other people's battles and see how you do a text battle...elevate dawg...

Shadow, your verse wasn't tha greatest either, but fuck it, you had enough to merk this kid. Punches were decent, but played...structure and flow was actually pretty damn good...ya got potential dawg...elevate....

Vote-Shadow

No hate...hit this up an' finish it off...thx...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117367

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