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choppa--city 5 83.33%
C_R_E_A_M 1 16.67%
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Old 04-11-04, 02:10 PM   #1
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choppa--city Vs C_R_E_A_M

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No less then 10 lines
I'll spit first
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Old 04-11-04, 02:13 PM   #2
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i'll drop when i get back online
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Old 04-11-04, 02:15 PM   #3
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yea ite............................................... ......
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Old 04-11-04, 03:10 PM   #4
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ok im herre....

choppa dosent wanna get his brainz ta "Splash" like "V8"//[v8 splash..think]
and his chest in pieces when i let off eight//
when im bangin his bitch im sure ta make her grab,suck-then-swallow//
and if u come in da room tripin,ya chest gone suck-in-hollowz//
leaven ya lungs "Hollow" like "Chocolate Easter Bunnies"//
im hearin ni99az puttin cash out for ya head...but dey can keep-dey-money//
kuz i'll roll ta choppa--city and erase-ya-name//
wit no traces so i aint-ta-blame//
for da 1st degree slaughter of a website lame//
ya claim ya rhymes is "Hot" like "Melted Steel"//
so if u got gold inya mouth..they should melt-ya-grill//
boi ill put u in E.R like u was guest appearin on da show//
hooked up to a monitor,and respirators so ya breath wont go//
come in and i'll pull da cord//
and cut ya lifeline like bein murdered wit a double edged sword//
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Old 04-11-04, 03:16 PM   #5
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ace dis dude,y he still gettin spaded.....
brun dis dude,and then he really be CREAM-ATED....
what the hell r u doin??PMin me 4 a challenge....
ill kill cream easly,and use him as dressin 4 my salad......
chop u in half,and rhymes a get split and put in a gargbage....
dis niggaz words is special ed,and his flowz is retarted....
up in disappear like freddro and onyx......
got me battling help kids,cuz he hooked on phonix......
my dots got more flavor then yo flow.....
u should pull a dylon and fuckin no showed......
go back 2 HuStLeN 4 PeSoZ(his s/n) and do chatrooms.....
u prolly want be the best there,biting off pac 2 ......(lol)
i can put dots all over and still win wit dat drop....
he talking gunz,the only way he packin is a lunch box.....
dis nigga is joke, lookin like the engine who neva could....
he aient even showing his text record in public,dis nigga cant be good......
dont ever call out agin bitch,cuz u always get slapped......
and then do another signature,cuz that shit even wack.......
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Old 04-12-04, 02:08 PM   #6
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hey chopper bang on cream yeah i like that my vote is fo chop
 
Old 04-11-04, 03:23 PM   #7
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Ok Lets get the votes comen in..........................................
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Old 04-11-04, 03:51 PM   #8
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^^^^^^^^ uppin 4 votes
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Old 04-11-04, 03:57 PM   #9
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holy shit.... choppa ripped that one. but i must admit that both of your spits were dope. like yours c_r_e_a_m, you had some kick ass punches,
1) and if u come in da room tripin,ya chest gone suck-in-hollowz//
leaven ya lungs "Hollow" like "Chocolate Easter Bunnies"//
2)ya claim ya rhymes is "Hot" like "Melted Steel"//
so if u got gold inya mouth..they should melt-ya-grill//
3)your last two lines
the only problem though, was your flow, i couldnt relate to it as much as choppa's lines. either that or im just wack.lol

now for choppa's crits. i thought he was the stronger one since he went straight out with the personal : ''ace dis dude,y he still gettin spaded..... brun dis dude,and then he really be CREAM-ATED....''
i thought he used your name with cunning. also, choppa used more personals against cream, whereas cream was concentrating more on whats can he use to make good rhyms. ( no offence) thats was why i chose choppa for the win.

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Old 04-11-04, 06:37 PM   #10
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uppin 4 votes
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Old 04-11-04, 06:54 PM   #11
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Cream-i liked this punchline..."kuz i'll roll ta choppa--city and erase-ya-name//
wit no traces so i aint-ta-blame//
for da 1st degree slaughter of a website lame"
ur punches were very good....u started out a lil lame for me with the easter bunny shit tho...structure was good

Choppa-i didnt feel ur punches as much as i thought....only good one was "5EE9
ace dis dude,y he still gettin spaded.....
brun dis dude,and then he really be CREAM-ATED...."...the rest were rusty...that hooked on phonix thing is a lil old now so try 2 up up ur punches....other than that metar flow structure was better than cream....

vote:choppa.....only cause ur flow was good....if this was only based on punches cream would have won honest to go....but i based it on everything so thats why u won...pce
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Old 04-11-04, 07:19 PM   #12
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^^^^^^^ uppin 4 votes
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Old 04-11-04, 07:33 PM   #13
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ace dis dude,y he still gettin spaded.....
brun dis dude,and then he really be CREAM-ATED....

oooooooooooooo dog this line killed it. an amzin opener kept me fixed on ya verse
a pleasure to read dog

what the hell r u doin??PMin me 4 a challenge....
ill kill cream easly,and use him as dressin 4 my salad......

a sick punch, this is hot shit

cream

when im bangin his bitch im sure ta make her grab,suck-then-swallow//
and if u come in da room tripin,ya chest gone suck-in-hollowz

ok line but its played dog
get some originality

choppa had better and more personals, and punches hit harder

vote choopa
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Old 04-11-04, 08:31 PM   #14
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uppin 4 votes baby..............1-0 me
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Old 04-11-04, 08:58 PM   #15
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aight, copper city won. Here is why

He had decent personals, good punchlines, i don't think either of you had multies. your structure was the same.
Overall i feel city's verse was stronger....cream you pit obvious punchlines in quotes and thats kind of annoying...also, I don't like your style..thats an oppinion, but i just don't like the gun talk unless it's metaphorical...anyways...okay battle i guess, it wasn't close in my oppinion but cream you got good flow..much respect and love to both of you
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