10-20 linez
no d\r
u spit 1st

Ez Dogg,

letz get this shit Movin

Yo...yo,

violation-to-Va, dont u mean violation-to-far?/
youve gone past ya mark, your worthless, your outta rhymz/
Itz my turn 2 shine, spark an go forward in time/

I kno Ive beat yo ass, so i got time 2 go home/
Fuck yo Girl, peace her tit, Hav a lick on her clit/
Cuz by the time u get here, an u start 2 spit/
your girlz gonna luv me,I seen the future, "your shit"/
then i pull my glock on u - cock it, an blow/
I left ya girl in the street cuz i found out shez a Ho/

why u do this battle man? u aint cut out 4 this shit/
I know you aint a retard, but dont know how 2 spit/
U should go home, type in google "what doez G-Rattle mean"/
I'LL TELL U NOW MUTHA FUCKER, FORE I WIPE U CLEAN/

Peace out Dogg

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Ez doggz Peace out 2 ma Home Boyz In UK

Battle Me

yo dat was hott an all but u bout to come clean\\
imma pull yah touge out my gurls clit an brush it wit a sand machine\\
you new to da game hah keep yah head up lil niggas like chu i gettin fed up\\
u bout to be introduced to dre\\
tha person who gonna fuck yah momma on a rainy day\\ :flipoff
wat is ur purpose in dis rap game\\
im not fillin u earn a name\\
u can't beat my ass it be impossible\\
u prolly run back gitcha wak grew ill take all ya"ll\\

u like fire works pop every where\\
imma fuck woop yah rhymes ass an burn"em i dun't care\\
u notta a perpose\\
so why u even try u an't gonna herts us\\
immma teach u a lesson gonna be profound\\
beat yah familys ass then imma slam chu down\\
an dogg im notcha pet\\
ill kill your mut to make u regret\\
u a final chapta in da book we call pain\\
this experience is gonna hert chu so bad gonna have inflicktions to da brain\\
imma letchu go 4 now but 1st im gonna go fuck yah gurl\\
my dick went in hurr an made hur "'yurr""
dat was good pussy an all\\
nxt tyme u step up u bound to fall\\

igght easy battle hurr peeps up in dem votes forsho

Yo come on Doggz, u kno we got sum heavy shit 4 sho here, get thoze votez rollin.

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Ez doggz Peace out 2 ma Home Boyz In UK

Battle Me

rattle-u had some OK shit
punches-7/10
structure-8/10
vocab-7/10
flow-8/10
overall-7/10

VA
punches-8/10
structure-8/10
vocab-8/10
flow-9/10
overall-8/10

vote-va

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Biggin Up 4 sum More votez in ere,

We want sum viewz 2 sho us whatz needed

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Ez doggz Peace out 2 ma Home Boyz In UK

Battle Me

easy vote peeps come need uppppin in da vote

need sum votes hurr easy battle

breakdown for G-Rattle:

flow:straight flow worked through the whole peice good job !! 7/10

volcabretty basic but it gets the job done 6/10

punches:nothing really i didn't see much aside from jokes bout his girl you know how much that's been done pretty played out 5/10

overall:18/30 pretty good mechanics and all that but your punches could use some work

beakdown for violation-to-va:

flowretty good throughout your verse alittle room to improve but 7/10

volcabretty basic room to improve here 6/10

punches:you flipped some of his lines not bad, you didn't really do anything else though aside from more girl jokes you two are really hard on each others girl, really work on this for gettin some new orignal punches 6/10

overall:19/30 i gave you an extra point for the flip on his line cause some body's gotta win right??

vote-- violation-to-va both of you keep workin on your shit

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

itte need sum votes uppppinn

need sum votes