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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
DeLeon 5 62.50%
Juss_Blaze 3 37.50%
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Old 04-12-04, 08:15 PM   #1
Juss_Blaze
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Juss_Blaze vs. DeLeon

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you post first. 20 lines max
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Old 04-12-04, 08:16 PM   #2
DeLeon
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say dogg dont you have a PM?????????????????????????
 
Old 04-12-04, 08:18 PM   #3
DeLeon
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alright dogg im gonna spit gimme some time though
 
Old 04-12-04, 08:19 PM   #4
ghettooutlaw9333
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anyone wanna battle me im up for it, new blood in the game ghetto is for real
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Old 04-12-04, 08:29 PM   #5
DeLeon
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I'll "snatch your Necklass" then show the main-attractrion
When I shoot your Brain-in-fractions, that's called a "Chain-Reaction"


i'll destroy your brain/till your body crashes like a derailed train/shatter everyone of your veins/just too watch you scream in pain/till they decalare mantally insane.
i hope yo rymes are updated/and verbally stated/cause yo shit looks like somthing you just ejaculated.
i'll hit you with a full force to the abdomen/stab you with a javuline/leave yo ass so bloody they wont know which casket you in.
im comin at you with LYRICAL FORCE/cause when i strike i show no remorse.
i stand alone/im the king of this throne/i'll beat you so bad just to hear you MOAN and GROAN/break all your bones.
leave yo ass in the middle of the desert strangled and raped to death/with duct over your ankles and a paper bag to take a breath.
 
Old 05-01-04, 02:20 PM   #6
MARVOLoUsJ1009
STiLL Da FUKKiN SiCKEST!!
 
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From: NyC,Da HOMe OF Da TWiN TOWER'S!
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Quote:
Originally Posted by DeLeon
I'll "snatch your Necklass" then show the main-attractrion
When I shoot your Brain-in-fractions, that's called a "Chain-Reaction"
^^^ummm whut r u tryin da say dunn??? it aint workin

i'll destroy your brain/till your body crashes like a derailed train/shatter everyone of your veins/just too watch you scream in pain/till they decalare mantally insane.
^^^ummmmmm no
i hope yo rymes are updated/and verbally stated/cause yo shit looks like somthing you just ejaculated.
^^^^homo...leave da jerkin off bars alone
i'll hit you with a full force to the abdomen/stab you with a javuline/leave yo ass so bloody they wont know which casket you in.
^^^^??
im comin at you with LYRICAL FORCE/cause when i strike i show no remorse.
i stand alone/im the king of this throne/i'll beat you so bad just to hear you MOAN and GROAN/break all your bones.

leave yo ass in the middle of the desert strangled and raped to death/with duct over your ankles and a paper bag to take a breath.


trash rap dunny....no punchlines at all no personals...u had a lil creativity tho..i'll give u dat 6/10
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Old 04-12-04, 08:30 PM   #7
DeLeon
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its a little shorter but i dont give a F$*@!!!!!!!@!
 
Old 04-12-04, 11:32 PM   #8
Juss_Blaze
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battle me? dog i end carrers if you step wid it/
have yo ass doin mtv shows, like Xibit/
Im Blaze a.k.a. emcee with a sweet flow/
i see what u thinkin when i leave yo brains with a peephole/
you an emcee faker than a new hair weave/
the only time you blast guns is new on years eve/
i got niggas shook, online digital flinching/
this aint rap, its a fukkin lyrical lynching/
yea. my rap style is sick, im a nasty nigga/
my bars blow shit up like an iraqi nigga/
you soft like butt cheeks, im grimy like mud fights/
you aint a rapper, the only bars you know serve bud lights/
its a TKO when my punchlines punch dude/
i leave you full holes like that yellow sponge dude/
Yo Mr. Moderator, where you find these people?/
i eat these stray cats like chinese people/
Dog, its ok if you wanna sing for a minute/
but next time you wanna battle dog, think for a minute/
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Old 05-01-04, 02:23 PM   #9
MARVOLoUsJ1009
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From: NyC,Da HOMe OF Da TWiN TOWER'S!
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Originally Posted by Juss_Blaze
battle me? dog i end carrers if you step wid it/
have yo ass doin mtv shows, like Xibit/
^^good job at makin da words ryhme but dis line was dumb
Im Blaze a.k.a. emcee with a sweet flow/
i see what u thinkin when i leave yo brains with a peephole/
^^okay
you an emcee faker than a new hair weave/
the only time you blast guns is new on years eve/
^^^u should of added some more 2 dat dunn
i got niggas shook, online digital flinching/
this aint rap, its a fukkin lyrical lynching/
^^^no ya lines gettin 2 short its fukkin up ya flow
yea. my rap style is sick, im a nasty nigga/
my bars blow shit up like an iraqi nigga/
^^no
you soft like butt cheeks, im grimy like mud fights/
you aint a rapper, the only bars you know serve bud lights/
^^^lol nice punch
its a TKO when my punchlines punch dude/
i leave you full holes like that yellow sponge dude/
^^^no
Yo Mr. Moderator, where you find these people?/
i eat these stray cats like chinese people/
^^^good concep but u made it look kind of weak
Dog, its ok if you wanna sing for a minute/
but next time you wanna battle dog, think for a minute/

^^^okay....

i think u had a betta ryhme scheme than da other dude u had a few punches here and there nice flow..but ya lines get short then they go long..but u get my vote tho u did ya shit...

my vote-juz

return dat favor ya'll link in my sig...GON
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Old 04-12-04, 11:51 PM   #10
Diagnose
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hey...Deleon won this one cuz basicly..he had better punch..and had multi's unlike you man..like why did u use nigga twice...

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Old 04-13-04, 12:29 AM   #11
Juss_Blaze
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ass. if you read the rhyme you would get the scheme. nasty nigga rhymes with iraqi nigga. if you knew rap music you would know most rappers use rhyme scheles that sometimes have the same word at the end.
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Old 04-13-04, 07:51 AM   #12
DeLeon
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for real dogg
listen to styles p "My Life" good example of a scheme that uses nigga

uppin ^^^^^^^^^^^6
 
Old 04-13-04, 06:52 PM   #13
Juss_Blaze
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uppin............................................. ...
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Old 04-14-04, 01:08 AM   #14
Juss_Blaze
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uppin............................................. ......................
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Old 04-14-04, 03:27 AM   #15
Vc
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From: VA originally BMore,Md
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that was a balze umm juss blaze got this.. he got this with using punches not always heard.... like this..

yea. my rap style is sick, im a nasty nigga/
my bars blow shit up like an iraqi nigga/
you soft like butt cheeks, im grimy like mud fights/
you aint a rapper, the only bars you know serve bud lights/

juss sick. witht he blaze...
juss blaze
compo 8/10
struct 8.5/10
flow 9/10
vocab 6/10
rhyme 7/10

deleon
compo 7/10
struct 6/10
flow 6/10
vocab 7/10
rhyme 8/10

my votes goes to juss blaze
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