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i got one extra rule..if that's okay 3-0 is KO.
up to 5 anyway otherwise....

how u claimin bedrock but choppa city is outta new orleans/
this your next battle lost,like nastradamus this battle i already forseen/
you just a baby,spittin nursery rhymes,wastin my time.11:54,its past your bedtime you only thirteen/
ill get you to bedrock,snatch your nikes get you barefooted like flintstones/
little self peddles cars like fisher-prics gotcars for the imaginary grown/
u too little for my level wait til your hormones began to develope/
miniature i stuff your words like spam envelopes/
u the type to get infected from premature erections,after visualzing 2 cantaloupes/
u progressing de-aging the only way to get a *step up* is from me, i got the antidote/
ill MJ your ass, i speak softly,then seconds later by me chop get lyrically groped/

okay youngin immma bout to go a lil above your level of understandin might need a dictionary...

meticulously ridiculously spittin ill, *thus~see* couldnt get *funds* if i was *worth* *trusty*/
if i got trpped in your crib my young son.. ur toys sitll couldnt rattle me/it just be *must see tv* like friends ill *grace* you with the *will* to battle me/
imma kleptomaniac i keep stealing these wins, nymphomaniac i keep raping these emcees/
you cant be me you see,im not the one trying to Me,while watching MTV/
choppa city thought he had this locked in like he was part of da band/
but ill be the one to stalk your ass like mtv ultimate fan/

man im done im sleepy as a bitch!! too! but im done, what yall think???? no feeding choppa!

oh yea.. obviously i checked in....aight so now it is your turn to go choppa city.

his dang structure look like,oprahs spinal cords......
talkin bout my reps,nigga u got 2 on yours..........
show u some skills on how 2 get better........
next time u do a username use more than 2 letters.......
should do a better job structuring yo lines.......
cuz dat there look twisted like a fractured spine......
wat up wit da starz is it a gurly thing......
closeline yo ass,and hang losses on yo game.......
wat da hell r u doin,PMin me talkin bout battle me please......
the way u biting spits,cant believe this nigga aient caught rabies......
cant believe mugsy bouges tryin 2 stand up 2 my heights.....
dont ever do outloud freestyle battles,when u cant even type right.....
shouldve neva put the 3-0 a ko cuz u a joke.......
after this battle he aient even goin wanna say uppin 4 votes.....
u can be sadien and still wont be hotter.......
i kno wat VC stand 4,the VICTUM of CHOPPER......
u jus been killed added 2 my KO list.......
its like yo punches not connected,like fingers wit out a fist......
so please leave and neva 2 2 return......
take yo lyrics wit em vinilla ice a agree that they should be burned.....

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i like choppas structure....Vc what that stank 4 vince carter...work on your structure kid

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yeah i feel chopper got this one.. he sturcture was much more organized, he had way more personals, and his metaphors, i feel were better. VC focus more on structure as opposed to using dictionary words that seem to be big words.. Yo chopper when you ready i would like a rematch. i wasnt feeling how i lost that last battle.......

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^^^^^^^^ ite kiddo lol
^^^^^^^^^^ uppin 4 votes .

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my vote.. for chopa better punches...................................

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yo i liked both yall verses, they were pretty dope compared to some of the garbage i c

VC- u got much skillz, and i like yur style
but he definately got u on the structure point
it needs work, the fact that its a lil hard to follow takes away from the lyrical onslaught u displayed. try seperating yur lines and thoughts better, other than that a few fresher punches and u r there

chopa- to me you should have come harder with yur closer, and step up the vocab a lil b/c vc was on fire. but u came strong with good multies, punches, and great personals.

fav line:
"u can be sadien and still wont be hotter.......
i kno wat VC stand 4,the VICTUM of CHOPPER......"

i just call it how i c it
hit my battle and do the same
vote= choppa
peace

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271

God...I hate to do this...but I'm gonna anyway....My vote goes to Choppa City...

First, analysis (and then I'll explain why i hate to vote for him)

I've really got nothing too positive to say about VC's verse. I guess the vocab was a'ight if, by vocab, you mean knowing big words (but not knowing how to use them in a way that a) makes sense, b) flows or c) does ANY damage at all to an opponent). Having a large vocabulary is useless if you can't use it sparingly...Punches may be in there, but they're too convoluted and hard to find, they don't stand out much at all...

Choppa didn't have a whole lot of work to do, in my opinion, but let's look at it anyway. "shouldve neva put the 3-0 a ko cuz u a joke.......after this battle he aient even goin wanna say uppin 4 votes....." Good line, not great; I smiled a bit when I read it. "u can be sadien and still wont be hotter......i kno wat VC stand 4,the VICTUM of CHOPPER......" the punchline is clever, but I don't know WHAT the fuck you said in the setup line. "u jus been killed added 2 my KO list.......its like yo punches not connected,like fingers wit out a fist......" Again, clever...really like the punchline.

So, I'm giving it to Chopper...but let me say why I HATE to..."dont ever do outloud freestyle battles,when u cant even type right....." This line just irritates the shit out of me. First off, outloud freestyles would, obviously, have NOTHING to do with typing so the line doesn't make sense but, more importantly, if you're gonna talk shit about someone elses typing you oughta make sure yours is top-notch. I understand spitting fast and your fingers fucking up...but even in a freestyle, you can go back and fix mispellings and stupid fuckin' grammar. I'm just saying that, if I was battling for instance and was wearing some dorky fuckin' clothes, I'm not gonna talk shit about my opponents clothes cuz I'm just settin' myself up...and that's what the "typing" shit did. Just my two cents.

Regardless, Chopper gets the vote.

E

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Its kind of perceptible who took this...here...I'll break it down so you know what I mean.....

VC-Sorry, but your structure just depleted your chance of taking this victory, your punches were very played out also, most of your lines I didn't even understand, dog, you were forcing MUCH too many lines in there.

Choppa City-Had a lot of personals, punches, and funny lines. Also had nice metaphors there, too(note the oprah line...lmao )

Punches-CC, had personals which really stood out, letting CC take this catergory.
Multies-I didn't really see ANY in both verses, so none.
Metaphors-VC didn't have any in his verse, CC had this funny ass metaphorical line, so CC takes this catergory.
Vocabulary-VC takes this because of his vocabulary part in his verse.
Flow/Structure-Haha, please don't even ask, CC takes this, VC's was just out of shape.
Humor/Creativity-CC, he had many funny lines that kept me cracking up.
Vote-Sorry CC, but VC took this....haha sike , CC took this win by alot, a blowout by CC.....

Oh and CC if you don't mind, try to peep my rhyme, Industry Diss

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man wuts wrong wit u ppl..vc was hella better

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a yo first off there is some serious dick riding goin on here the nigga vc killa choppa city ,,, citys verse was trash vc had better format than city

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I Like Both Verses.....
But I Have To Go To Choppa....
Vote Choppa City Better Flow... Structure...
Vc Your Stuff Was Hard To Read...