Hahaha, time for you motherfuckers to die..hahha lol


Cam'ron is starting to look gay with his 'pink wanna be pimp'/
Faggot thinks he's skilled, but his skills are smaller than 'imps'/
Chingy needs to get 'hints' that he's wack when he 'spits'/
He'd do all of us at RB a capacious favor and 'quit'/
Busta Rhymes got fatter lips than 'Sum 41'/
I despise this kid, I'll leave him 'done with my gun'/
And this other bastard raps like he's on 'steroids', name's 'DMX'/
But when I come along, punk acts 'paranoid', also says it to other, but he has 'sex with the same sex'/
Faggot needs to start showing especially me some 'respect'/
Lil' Jon always 'hollers' when he's on the 'mic'/
Bitch earns a 'dollar' and thinks he's pimp, 'despite his own wife is a dike'/
Eminem doesn't concieve that people don't enjoy his 'fallacious' attempts at 'humor'/
So feminine, he even acts like a woman, and he gets his 'ass kicked', thinks he's strong when he hasn't gone through 'puberty'/
Ja and 50 gotta stop sucking each other's 'cocks'/
And they gotta stop on their act of 'wanna-be pac'!!/

FUCK THA INDUSTRY lol

Note-I know there's a cypher on this topic, just wanted to make my own thread on it though....

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ahah yo i was feelin dat nice punches on da disses nice vocab words
i give it a 8/10

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Lyrical Crooks:fuck wit us, ya get shook up an book up in tha I.C.U.

the flow was alittle off and the punches coulda been stronger but i think if you re-read it and write it over it would be fire

I was okay but the industry are based on more popular disses then dissin' Chingy, Busta, 50 and Ja, Lil Jon, Cam'ron, Eminem....SO when You Say Fuck tha Industry....Mean the WHOLE industry...Niggas Like Jay-Z, Nas, Da Band, Loon, Def Jam, Roc-a-Fella..get my drift...

Nice though...

^^yea im feeling what both of you are saying

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