10 lines
no d/r,cv,biting
you spit first
house rules
you know the damn deal son lets go good luck

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KiLlAh BwOy

here is something you cant understand... how i could just killah Bwoy//little boy step away this mic isnt a toy//my flow straight acid, gets under your skin//what you thought cuz i'd spit first it would help you win//You suck, just like the team in your avatar//I scar and leave mc's massacared//who know's who's gonna win this battle, I DO!// i could beat you if i spit a fucking haiku//what you got now was just a portion// if the good die young i should have been an abortion..

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shad·y
adj. shad·i·er, shad·i·est
1. Full of shade; shaded.
2. Casting shade: a shady grove.
3. Quiet, dark, or concealed; hidden.
4. Of dubious character or honesty; questionable. See Synonyms at dark

theres my 10 lines..................................

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shad·y
adj. shad·i·er, shad·i·est
1. Full of shade; shaded.
2. Casting shade: a shady grove.
3. Quiet, dark, or concealed; hidden.
4. Of dubious character or honesty; questionable. See Synonyms at dark

you like the william hung dude, cuz dawg your music career is just a joke/
You could put a rope around my neck while i rap,and i still wouldn't "choke"/

You a spider man fan? why dont you just "stick" to your regular job at the gay club/
Cuz we can all tell rappin aint for you,mayn ive seen cleaner things in my damn tub/

Smack shady genius in his mouf, now he stutterin like G-G-G-UNIT/
Have this bitch turn transexual,now he screamin SH-SH-SHE- UNIT/

I spit so sickly,thats why all my competitors leave with SARS/
You battlin me is like a dumb kid tryin to reach for the stars/

I didn't even try in this battle and you still comin up wit a loss/
Bwoy you jus got owned,so from now on dont call me killah bwy call me ya boss/



didnt even try hopefully this good enuff to take him...lmfao lets get these votes in playa ill return the favour

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KiLlAh BwOy

look i was feelin killah boys flows...all he had to do was spit the first bar and he would have beat you......

kilah: you was coo..you had good meta4s and alrite punches....pretty good for a newb......you should try out for my crew CLASS SIC...

shady: you was coo..i liked the haiku ryme.....you need to work on your structure tho..other than that good battle.....

vote=killah..

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my MYSPACE is Better than Yours

lol ya i guess u culd consider me as a noob its all graby ill get my record up

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KiLlAh BwOy

Alright Both Battles Fell Short In Each Category.. Punches/Creativity/Structure/Flow/ Multies/Vocab/WordPlay - - - Etc; ... Ya'll Work On Itt


But Check It.. Im Going To Have To Give My Vote To Killah Bwoy' .. Because His Flow Was A Bit Better Structured' .. And It Flowed Well Together' .. And Stayed On Topic .. Punches Were Threw' Some Connected Other Did Not' .. But He Got My Vote

CheCck These Lines For.. Good PunchLines::

you like the william hung dude, cuz dawg your music career is just a joke/
You could put a rope around my neck while i rap,and i still wouldn't "choke"/

^Better Then Any Of' .. SpiderMan's.. PunchLines' .. Most Of Em Fell Of Short!!

But There's My Vote

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lol ya thanx i wasnt puttin my best effort in this one...needa save sum brain powa for my next battle..dont want to go into writers block u know..so i jus did sumthin to beat it but thanx for da honest vote boo

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KiLlAh BwOy

Shady' - Spiderman' lol

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Killah - good spit man, had some sweer flow and some alright punches.

Best Line - you like the william hung dude, cuz dawg your music career is just a joke/
You could put a rope around my neck while i rap,and i still wouldn't "choke"/ (nice opener)

Worst Line - mack shady genius in his mouf, now he stutterin like G-G-G-UNIT/
Have this bitch turn transexual,now he screamin SH-SH-SHE- UNIT/

Shady - alright spit man, didnt flow to bad.. had a couple punches in there.

Best Line - NONE

Worst Line - You suck, just like the team in your avatar//I scar and leave mc's massacared//

OVERALL - I gotta go wit Killah wit better punches and flow, you didnt bring it hard enough shady, work on ya flow next time and also step up on the punches.

VOTE - Killah

RETURN THE FAV wit me and baller plz....http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119115

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On The Mic I'm Number One...I'm Also Number Two...
The

TAKE MY ADVICE FROM PEOPLE FROM CANADA nd FUCK YA LYFE

Breakdown:
Punches: Neither
Metas: Neither
Multies: Neither
Wordplay: Neither
Flow: Killah Bwoy
Disses: Killah Boy

Overall-Both Emcees Came Pretty Weak.No Real Punches Thrown.The Punches That Were Thrown Were Weak.Im Goin With Killah Bwoy On This Becuase He Had Better Disses Out Of The Two & His Verse Had Better,More Consistent Flow.Some Of Shady's Bars Didnt Rhyme Completely

Vote-Killah Bwoy

Elevate

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Punches: killa bwoy
Metas: killa bwoy
Multies: Nobody
Wordplay: shady
Flow: Killah Bwoy
closing: Killah Boy
start-killa bwoy
vote-killa bwoy

killa bwoy won dis 1 wit every thing besides wordplay and multies every thing else he killed shady wit.....
shady had nice word play
u gotz 2 get yo structure right pimp or yo verse goin be everywhere and nobody goin wanan read it but u had some tight shit it jus gotta be structured......
bwoy u had a nice verse and nice flow and u did yo thing on dis battle u get my vote