Just a song im sampling so give me a lil feed back...dont kno about the chorus either

CHORUS-
when i wasnt shit niggaz faught againts me
now that im king shit niggaz quick 2 see me
yall niggaz is on my dick
get off it, cause yall niggaz will neva get on top of it
(2x)

Verse-
neva born with riches and bitches
instead life left me with scars and stiches
burnt like hell,but niggaz neva cared instead only said shit is all swell
like i would wake up from it
and one day begin to spit
NO!,wasnt like that,lost my mother to a heart attack
for awhile i had my father to watch my back
but even then i knew niggaz wouldnt think id spit one track
so now that im spittin and hittin
niggaz is listening
waitin for me 2 blow up,some waitin for me 2 slow up
but see im'a keep it goin wit the family generation and grow up
and show niggaz why i flow so ill
it takes patiance and stillness to maintain this skill
im mad now and born again
feelin no pain,instead i feel 20 thousand dollars of rich grain
now niggaz know ive gained they wanna be on my dick
fuck that shit
im so full of it niggaz know im legit they wont kno where 2 lick
on my dick cause its so sick
to all u hoes who never believed
thanks alot cause after spittin this track i feel relieved
and never again will i let another niggaz decieve me
cause now that im hear all niggaz gonna see is ice on me
now bitches its QP in this bitch, riches and bitches is all they'll see on me
but besides that....

CHORUS-
when i wasnt shit niggaz faught againts me
now that im king shit niggaz quick 2 see me
yall niggaz is on my dick
get off it, cause yall niggaz will neva get on top of it
(2x)

Verse 2-
where were u hoes when i almost lost my life
2 a bitch who almost took it with a knife
thinking i wouldnt come back from the dead
and spread like a mad plaque who's seized fire
almost costin me to an early retire
losing my hope thinkin out loud well maybe life aint my desire
it's that same nigga now on my dick
lookin for me to give him a bitch to stick
then theres others,not knowin the whole truth
waitin for a chance to put a hole in me in a phone booth
all cause i wont give them any attention
instead stealin their hoes and pension
and livin it up in a mansion
i kno its sad to see me come from poor to rich
but get over it bitch
cause im fast pitch
even if i loose my life to a harsh ditch
my presence will still be here
so stick with it and stop askin where
where is all the dream that poor nigga had
cause im no MLK,he got gunned down sad
if i get gunned down it'll be cause
niggaz tryin to ride on my dick and feel the rich pulse
but nooo way BITCH the answer is false
QP stands alone like i was doin when i was a youngin
and im'a stand alone now that slangin and thuggin
and yall niggaz just wanna get on my dick
but back then....

CHORUS-
when i wasnt shit niggaz faught againts me
now that im king shit niggaz quick 2 see me
yall niggaz is on my dick
get off it, cause yall niggaz will neva get on top of it
(3x)

END BITCH!!!!.....tru song tho...so give me some feedback pleease

I Need Some Feed Back Come On Ppl......

i guess that shit is ok but don't think you gonna make it big off that song lol make it hotter wigga peace 1. lol

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mother fucker ur 1-3 and ur callin me a wigga? im black so the correct word should be nigga.....second of all i said its a sampling song didnt say im goin big...dont wanna go big...3rd of all ive seen niggaz come 2 this rap game of bullshittin songs than what i just posted...so b4 u insult think about the shit u say b4 u say it...fuckin youngin u dont kno shit about the rap game...ur 1-3 and u wanna talk like u king shit....nigga get off my dick also...i want real opinions not some bullshittin hatin ones....hoe...pce