2 rounds of battling votes gotta be explained gotta be at least 10 lines and under 20

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vote for this and I'll vote on your battle...honestly i'll return the favor

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yo u quik i like that, time=money
i didnt even know u set it up, my bad 4 da delay

checkin-in
u want 2 go first?
its 2 rounds so it doesnt matter

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check in

ill dis wanna be rapper,knowing he a playing herb......
after im thru wit my verse he prolly want have a afterword......(uppin 4 votes)
0-8 record-and we battling texture-he wouldnt get a win if tupac gave him a lecture...
5 votes easly took,have afterspeechless and shook,he prolly still wont win a battle if stevie wonder decided 2 take a look.......
imma open u twice,over yo hype,u no u wack when ppl dont feedback 2 yo openmics...
betta off goin 2 hiphoptalk and making a problem......
then after they answer they trip on yo wins column.....
u aient no MC go back 2 tutotials page.....
sit back and wathc the feedback as yo #8 fade......
cuz AFTER my words yo junk turning 2 nine.......
after u spit yo lame shit,then im ripping yo rhymes.....
make u swallow my spits,and u be shitting it out yo spine......
yo verses is weak,u wont win even if u feed off my mine......
im comin wit lesser cuz he guaranteed 2 have weak lines......

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check...yo

my chrome-steely is my pretty, yung sadity bitch dat is servin u head-shots
you was from CHOPPA-CITY, but it got Gritty, Pity now u under BEDROCK

yo thanx a lot for stopin in, I know u are very busy making the band on MTV
but seriously stop wathin them, make a stand, and get ur own IDENTITY( choppa)

i wanted to go two rounds, wit freestyles , so you can have a fair chance/
but you gon catch a beatdown in the meanwhile, and Afterword they cant even compare them

im not even an impressive battle rapper, but i manage wit raw talent
u an unconvincing actor-rapper thats over-dressing like tossin a salad

my agenda is to offend ya, but remember u get a chance to erase yur sin
my splendor of rhymes act like jigga sometimes, as i kill you
come back in the seccond round and kill you again.( Threats)

peace 4 now

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yo i didnt feed off u
but good drop
ill go first this time
final "words"

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final"words"

yo yur flow was pretty straight i can tell u really tried
but yur just getting getting on pace, and i been caught my stride
you say a lot of lil fly stuff, like an attention seekin fool
but leave you wit ya eyes shut like we playin peak-a-boo
hot lines no doubt you speak a few, but i doubt that u created'em
you bite from guys u listen too, misconscrue their view and update'em
but its too da gud playa, dont take it pesonal like monica
come see me in the hood im major dealin
and im focused so wont be killin just flat out-rhymin ya!

peace

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bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1)

Help me close these/ and I will help U
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i can put a covo down u still wont top it........
cuz dis was ova in da 1st round jus like da houston rockets.......
i dont y u wanted 2 when dis shit was ova in da 1st.......
y did u leave,i guess u had 2 go 2 another site jus 2 get yo verse.....
disappear take yo lyrics and forest gump homie jus run.....
u talkin bout choppa??u wouldnt even make da band if u was diddys son....
beat u down,wheep u down,yo daddy now,till yo momma come......
embarass u like timberlake did janet so act on......
cuz u kno dats yo sister look at his avatar its his husband as his icon......
dont got 2 reword yo shit,dis battle was over b4 it begin......
no matter how many pms u send,u still want watch a win......
lucky if u catch a vote,lil gary coleman tryin 2 reach my hieghts but he cant use diffrent strokes.....
comin into a battle when da shit shit sound like suttin he wrote......
comin wit wack lyrics ill slit his throat,a deaf person a tell AFTER i dont wanna hear his WORDS nomo.....
his shit sound like west coast..i see y he from LA....cuz his verse sound like a ocapella from snoop dawg and dre......(dres beats make their songs)
shouldnt even need a verse his words a be my best diss.......
im goin on 10-2 y dis bitch goin still be winliss.......
comin wit wack punches like his hand not connected 2 his wrist......
cuz when im done wit this nigga,aient no WORDS AFTER THIS....

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uppin 4 votes now.......................................

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itte dis was good battle
choppa
str 10/10
voc 10/10
flow 10/10
ovall 10/10

aftaworld nice
stru 10/10
flow 9/10
voca10/10
ovall 9/10

v/choppa
nice battle hit mine up wit an honest vote

ill dis wanna be rapper,knowing he a playing herb......
after im thru wit my verse he prolly want have a afterword......(uppin 4 votes)
0-8 record-and we battling texture-he wouldnt get a win if tupac gave him a lecture...
5 votes easly took,have afterspeechless and shook,he prolly still wont win a battle if stevie wonder decided 2 take a look.......dont make sense
imma open u twice,over yo hype,u no u wack when ppl dont feedback 2 yo openmics...
the rest is weak.

Flow-Afterword
Vocab-Afterword
Personals-Chopper City
Metaphors-Not much
Wordplays-not much
Punches-Chopper City
Overall-Afterword was tight wit multies too and overall his was better. Close battle though. Chopper ur first half was real tight, but the second half was wack. So sorry man, no hate. Peace.

uppin 4 votes.....................................

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yo keep the comments commin
idunno wut we are counting as sufficient feedback
b/c no h8 but spitfire didnt explain hisself, he just gave very flattering 9 & 10 ratings.
thanzx n e way
peace
uppin

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bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1)

Help me close these/ and I will help U
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i kno it want a explained vote but da moderator a take care dat but uppin 4 votes

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FIRST BATTLE
Choppa - you had an ok flow...stretched lines at times but for the most part ur flow was good....u had sum nice punches and sum decent ones....no really horrible ones....you didnt really have ne multis....but a nice verse overall

Best Line/Bar...
betta off goin 2 hiphoptalk and making a problem......
then after they answer they trip on yo wins column.....

Worst Line/Bar...
5 votes easly took,have afterspeechless and shook,he prolly still wont win a battle if stevie wonder decided 2 take a look.......

Afterword - u had good multis...punches were aight....flow was off b/c of stretched lines....nice lil personal in there...actually a couple....decent verse overall...

Best Line/Bar...
yo thanx a lot for stopin in, I know u are very busy making the band on MTV
but seriously stop wathin them, make a stand, and get ur own IDENTITY

Worst Line/Bar...
im not even an impressive battle rapper, but i manage wit raw talent
u an unconvincing actor-rapper thats over-dressing like tossin a salad

SECOND BATTLE
Afterword - this verse was alot better than your first....u had good multi's...hard hitting punches....and a nice flow....

Best Line/Bar...
hot lines no doubt you speak a few, but i doubt that u created'em
you bite from guys u listen too, misconscrue their view and update'em

Worst Line/Bar...
NONE

Choppa - good sustainment in this verse...started off well...finished off well...strong punches....a lil bit messed up flow in the middle....ok multis....nice verse....

Best Line/Bar...
shouldnt even need a verse his words a be my best diss.......
im goin on 10-2 y dis bitch goin still be winliss.......

Worst Line/Bar...
comin wit wack lyrics ill slit his throat,a deaf person a tell AFTER i dont wanna hear his WORDS nomo.....

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