G Deuce aka Da Grim Reaper vs Black Thief

rules:
10-15 lines
no d/r or hating votes
no feeding
no biting
just original shit

check in before spitting

Good luck

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Grim

in......

checking in my nigga, good luck....................

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Grim

aiight off top I got them bars that make ya back down
I "sleep" on weak niggas like u...keep on reppin "Naptown"
thinkin u got shit on me?Son u must have lost ya self
If I was in ya shoes I'd probably "off" myself
Even ya sig is whack...I give it a C-plus
u wanna be larger than life...I can send u to see Jesus
I gotta admit....this nigga softer than a marshmallow
Nigga couldnt throw punches even if he boxed his own shallow
Im deep and you shallow....I know its hard to follow
so I'm a spit it through my dick cause I know its easier for u to swallow

it should be "boxed his own shadow" on line 8

This one line I spit could destroy your whole rep online
I'll rebuke your tongue for even trying to steal my rhymes
You must not have seen the record, cause I reck heveck
My 6 wins in a row is "longer" than the Black's "package"
Blaze boys cause I have nothing but time on my hands
My lyrical state, will rape you and leave not even half A man
Speaking of plans, you just got denied of your pen and mic
I mesmerize your mind and leave you nothing but a question mark to write.
Seeing the light, your end is just at the end of the road
You would need a wonder of the world to even nic my flow.



Just some easy shit while I'm grubbing on some Bar-B-Que, Grandma's style

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Grim

uppin for votes..........uppin for votes.................

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Grim

uppin this bitchh.....come on vote!

uppin this bitchh.....come on vote!
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so I'm a spit it through my dick cause I know its easier for u to swallow
^^^That wuz the best line in ya verse

G's whole verse wuz better.

vote G duece

aiight....can I have a real vote?explanation or somethin?dont post if u aint got enough points to vote...aiight?

your verse wont betta dont take points to notice that. SerIoUslY

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[B]

ok quit freepostin in my thread...til u actually get a win or loss....be easy son...we tryin to get votes....can u vote?Aiight then....dont start somethin....

uppiin

aiight off top I got them bars that make ya back down
I "sleep" on weak niggas like u...keep on reppin "Naptown"

^Weak Opener Could Have Improved It A Bit!' ... 3/10

Im deep and you shallow....I know its hard to follow
so I'm a spit it through my dick cause I know its easier for u to swallow

^Nice Closer Also Very Nice Punch Best Line No Doubt 10/10

This one line I spit could destroy your whole rep online
I'll rebuke your tongue for even trying to steal my rhymes

^Nice Opener' ...!!! 9/10 And An Alright Multie' That I Seen!!

Seeing the light, your end is just at the end of the road
You would need a wonder of the world to even nic my flow.

^Alright Closer! Could Have Been Better 8/10

Speaking of plans, you just got denied of your pen and mic
I mesmerize your mind and leave you nothing but a question mark to write.


^Best Line In Your Verse 10/10 ...


Vote: G~Deuce

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