20 - 40 lines
ya know the rest...
i'll spit first, lets get this shit underway

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sorry dawg, fucked up the title, fuck it, spin that shit...

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check check check lets get this going oh and anyone checkin this thread, vote on my open battles links in my sig

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

hydroponic buzz is back feedin' this rap game casually/
schizophrenic beats i'm bleedin' meanin' they're beyond reality/
i'll dig out this wigga who'll bite on ma barrel, tryin' to figure if i'll pull the damn trigga'/
well i've already pulled it, fool don't fight it's useless, ma rhymes are ma bullits/
you're crew can't pursue this, i'm through as the truest, cos i'm bold an' i'm fluent/
whats with the 69, is that when you have a good time with you're partner?/
it's not a crime, i suppose that it's fine if you enjoy fuckin' that fuck Aaron Carter/
so fuck you dirtboy, an the only dirtpath that i've seen, leads from you're asscheeks/
i enjoy to deploy, an squirt out my wrath cos it's mean, you'll get KO'd for weeks/

while we're "rollin' down the street smokin' endo, sippin' on gin an' juice"/
you be "strollin' down discreetly playin' Nintendo, takin' all our abuse"/
i've got ma mind on the honeys, but i still drop these i'll rhymes/
i'll turn you blind, i'm not bein' funny, i can brighten up dark times/

you better learn from this 'boy' cause ya up against a man/
i know you yearn to hit the mic' like this, maybe you can one day/
you're gonna have to get you're ass in line boy, i'm the illest an i'm here to stay/
the real mccoy, fuckin' rap's Rob Roy, wit the deadliest display of dismay to convey/

in the end, all that'll be left of that fag 69/
is a cement body bag, contain' a sign sayin' i resign/
sorry dawg maybe next time

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i read your verse and bitch! you must be buzzing something horrible//
think that can beat me? without punches and a flow that's terrible//
ha and the funny thing about this kid and this battle and while it all//
is he's buzzing from a hit of pure 100 percent grade 'A' oragano//
checkin out asses and under age pop stars is that how you roll?//
trying to win a battle? or are you just looking for another homosexual//
get off this thread with that shit cause the fag in your is rather tall//
the smell of shit coming from you is worst then that of a public stall//
you'll have a chance against me if your advertising your homosexuality//
no matter how it be though i'll tear you apart you winning or if it is me//
oh and after i beat you here don't forget to go to the league and check in//
so i can see you battle there get destory and handed a loss yet again//
and all cause this little bitch saw kids like bow wow and j-kwon rappin//
thing is what makes them pop is there shit is striaght being ghost written//
shit this kid's lryics are so bad that after your done with all your losing//
people on this board will use your name as part of some punchlining//
saying who there battling is wack like you and their winning like me//
i'm an infinate amount ahead of you even after you bite eminem's lp//
after losing to me, be like jay z, fade to black and end your career g//
this fucking virgin jacking off so much he went from a penis to a pussy//
hard to gushy still got only men after you so don't go and start to worry//

mah i'm done

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

uppin this for votes but of course it will stay un voted upon just like every other one of my battles

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

uppin for votes Will someone vote on this so we can get this shit sorted out. The favour will be returned.

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uppin...

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aiight this was a nice battle....hyrdoponic buzz came nice as hell i was feelin most of his verse ill punches/personals..wordplay flow...overall this was a nice drop by you..as for dirtboy u came weak half ya shyt didnt rhyme alot was filler and u didnt flow like i know u can overall u came aiight but u need to work on punches and flow a little....

vote: hydroponic buzz

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RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion

nice battle fellas. obviously hydroponic you're the better emcee. dirtboy you spit nice too. but you lyrics where hard to understand. both of your lines are mad close. i give this battle to hydroponic_buzz

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THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE

I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS

SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE

uppin...

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This one goes to Hydronponic Buzz. Dirtboy, yo shit didn't rhyme in the beggin', His punches was harder, flow betta, Personals, aight multis. You got sonned, have a nice day.

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uppin 4 votes...

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ok my breakdown

dirtboy: horrible,terrible..duz not rhyme all aragono that does not rhyme check in and again duz not really rhyme then writen,losin,punchlining THAT DUZ NOT RHYME pussy and worry DOES NOT RHYME playa most of ya ish did not rhyme but the lines punches and structure was there

Hypnotic buzz:
ya shit was pretty sick,most of your shit rhymed i liked ya opener and i can tell you have potential nothin stood out though

vote: dawg i would of voted on dirtyboy but then i thought i could just type a hole bunch of sick punchlines without them rhyming and jus say thats my verse and thstas not really fare..so i give my vote to hydroponic buzz

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KiLlAh BwOy

please someone vote to close this thread... cheers...

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