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creaTivitie 5 100.00%
S@ndM@n 0 0%
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Old 04-20-04, 03:25 PM   #1
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Battle vs. creaTivitie

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10-15 lines house rulez
no hate votez
 
Old 04-20-04, 03:47 PM   #2
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drop kid i will spit after you........................
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Old 04-20-04, 03:52 PM   #3
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Kill niggaz lyrically, so da folkz say I pack heat//
But pplz avoid me cuz I roll six deep//
An u bitchez fear me cuz I bury u deep six feet//
Sleep niggaz, so they call me the S@ndM@n//
Im worldly known da only one u get love from is your own dam hand//
Im up against a kid tryin 2 be a man but is truly a gurl in disguise//
This she can say not true and glare wit fierce eyes//
But we all know there is not a thing between the thighs//
Swat this nigga and his group classic like flies//
An From rock bottom u can look to da skiez bow down 2 da rise of da emcee king//
Creativitie’s u Beating me that ur wet dream//
 
Old 04-20-04, 03:54 PM   #4
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wat the fuck.....you bout to get killed...sorry. should have came wit mo heat......you should have never pm me talkin all this shit..now its over........

not my cherck in.......
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Old 04-20-04, 03:58 PM   #5
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k weak nigga spit ur stuff and lez let da ppl decide
 
Old 04-20-04, 04:01 PM   #6
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man i told you in a pm that you still had time to bak out but you still wanted it....i no that i havent been spitten to the best of my ability but your weak.....



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Old 04-20-04, 04:18 PM   #7
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my rymes cum cleaner this SAND MAN jackin off in his bath//
his lryics couldnt keep CUMMIN if he had his mom on his behalf//
punchlines makin direct hits to your chest,im takin your last breath//
caution your passing is close,in my hands i hold your life or death//
its like im "spitten rulers" the way i got you "measuring da-feet"//(defeat)
even if you put a miami jersey in a suitcase you still couldnt pack heat//
you got balls for wantin to battle, now its time for your vesectomy//
look if you were my shadow you still coulnt come next-to-me//
this kid should have stook to freepostin, cuz battles he'll never-win//
just killed dis kid, you should have stook to battlin kids ur better-then//

alrite i no he wasnt a challenge but no one else would abbtle..and he kept pm me to battle so i gave him his chance.........
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Old 04-20-04, 04:33 PM   #8
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Well.. not even close. Creative just basically ripped you, kid. S@nd... your verse didn't rhyme in places, your opner used "6 feet deep" twice... you had terrible flow, especially towards the end and your punches were weak or nonexistent. Try not to talk about "swatting" him the whole time... do something original... work on flow, rhymes, wordplay, vocab... yeah.

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Old 04-21-04, 01:41 PM   #9
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vote niggas

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uppin for votes............................................. ..............
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Old 04-21-04, 01:47 PM   #10
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Uh...shit...Sandman...you didn't have a chance dawg. Not a hope in hell. Creativitie spit half-assed...and he still merk'd you. Your punches were weak, your lines were played, the only thing decent about your verse was your flow. Werk on it dawg. Don' get discouraged.

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No hate...hit this up honestly...thx...

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Old 04-21-04, 02:05 PM   #11
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damn,creative kilt it!soz sand man but creative just had the punches and the flow.

return the favour please,ull find mi battles where they all are.peace
 
Old 04-21-04, 02:09 PM   #12
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uppin for 4.......................................
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Old 04-21-04, 02:15 PM   #13
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Lol Creativitie won this by like _________________________________________ this much lol:
Punches: C....my rymes cum cleaner this SAND MAN jackin off in his bath//<~~ LoL good shyt
Openner: C...my rymes cum cleaner this SAND MAN jackin off in his bath//
Closer:this kid should have stook to freepostin, cuz battles he'll never-win//
just killed dis kid, you should have stook to battlin kids ur better-then//
Multis: None
Structure:C..

V/Creativite

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119788

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120128
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Old 04-21-04, 02:19 PM   #14
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uppin for vote number 5...................................
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Old 04-21-04, 02:21 PM   #15
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b4 this battle closes just wanted to say....evryone thanks for the votes
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