So That's It, Fuck Im Past 'Bliss-Filled'
Spines Kinked Still From 'Pink-Pills'
I Think Ill Thoughts While I Dream
An While Im Awake My Brain Cant Stop The Schemes
From Brewin Up Through Seams With Hate
This Fiend Just Waits Till The Day I Can't Create
A Perfect View Of What Every Emcee Should Be An State
Thats Not Already In Me & U Wait Now Ive Become A Destructive Mate
Slumped In A Chair An Cant Function
Staring Out The Window, Its Just A Visual Consumption
Im Eight-Teen An Can't Say, Look I See Somthin
It's Just A Bird But I Believe I Can Fly
It's Just A Word But I Believe I Should Die
It's Just My World An I See It Through Your Eyes
I Wish I Could Believe In My True Self Like You Believe In Your Lies
An Even Though I Try There Are Voices In My Head On The Daily
Choices I Made Made A Medly Of My Life & Mixed It Up So Bad I Cant Hate Me
I Need To Develope My Way Through This Sick An Twisted Passage
Its All Irrellevant When U Think About It We All Gunna End Up In A Casket
Fuck It Give Me A Glock So I Can Go Out Blastin
Its All Im Askin
Trying To Turn My Life In To A Porno Movie With A Little Bit Of Action
I Can't Feel My Legs No More Im In Some Sort Of Passive State
Man These Psycho Thraputic Drugs Are Fuckin Great
An Hypno Therapy Had Me Making A Bloody Mess
Repressed Aggression Let Loose Is Lovely Yes
Im Here To Make You Think About The Hate On Each One Of Ur Chests
An Yes Its All Over You Can Kill Me Im Already Dead But Blessed


*Something I Wrote While I Was Bored* lol

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coo nice poem........i liked it ..all i can say is nice work dp.....

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my MYSPACE is Better than Yours

Thanks Appriciate The Posotive FeedBack CreaTiviTie!! ...

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thats ill girl for real, the thing is i just went to a funeral so i was just comtemplating some deep shit earlier, you definitely are on that level that i was today.

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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.

Thanks VanGo' Hope Everything Went Well' ..! My Apology'z!!!!

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Damn gurl that shit was mad hot. Keep them poems coming. Oh, why is my name on the end of your respect list. Come on now shorty?

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Grim

good shit very deep i almost got lost in ur wordz

Thanks G' Duece' Appriciate It...!! Thanks Unknown Assasin' ..!! lol.. Sorry' Bout Dat' ..!!

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Not bad... the problem is that it doesn't flow that well in most places, from line to line.. there is sort of a huge disconnect... also sometimes it seemed you forced a rhyme by going with odd word choice, which you really don't need to do. Not perfect, but I'm definetely feeling the emotion.

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

G your name just fits... its short. But anyways. This shit is hot, and it could have been put on a beat, it could be an open mic or a poem. Really good shit... I'm happy to see a nother good poetry head here.

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do your research.

** Me Aswell .... lol!

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se poetry doesnt have 2 flow kd

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good shit dp keep up tha work

Thanks Lot' .. And The Rest Of Ya'll.. Appriciate The Positive FeedBack For Real Good Looking Out!! !!!


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